Serpent's Allure

The author's writing style is really good. He describes the affair in bed elegantly, making people emotional but not lustful. He has both emotional and plot lines in mind. He has a rich vocabulary. Although the ending is not satisfactory, the flaws are not hidden. It is a very good book.

The writing is delicate and the characters are vivid and full. My minor flaw after reading this book is that the plot is a bit redundant and the conflict was not very intense. The two female protagonists basically had a fight and then reconciled in one chapter. Then they argued like this several times in the book. Also, the transition between scenes was very long. It's very long. I personally feel that the Yuan Chen area and Wutong Ridge should be the big scenes, and eliminating karma should be the main goal of the second part. However, the plot in the Shuilian Cave in the middle is a bit long, and the demon king that emerges is a bit abrupt, and it feels confusing. I was a little bit jumpy after watching it, maybe it was my own fault. On the other hand, although there are many characters appearing, I feel that the plot and the content of the characters are not very consistent. For example, the palace master in the early stage, the snake demon king and the national master did not appear in the later stage. Then Qiqiao and Yu Linglong, who have been following the protagonist group, I originally thought that their development might improve during the main plot. In the end, I felt that there was more writing, but it was more like a direct flavoring for the two heroines. This way of writing results in each person's character being very full and distinct, but it is difficult to leave a deep impression, because it seems that the characters appear to serve the protagonist and have no direction of their own development. However, I feel that the writing style is really good, and the emotions between Snake and Tu are quite sweet. And I personally feel that it is Shuangjie. When I explained it later, the snake has no deeper relationship with those "flowers and plants". And judging from the various behaviors of snakes, she should be the kind of person who can DIY her own things when needed. Looking forward to the next one.

It's really beautiful, what's more! Why does my name appear in it? ! ! What a coincidence [smile]

The writing is very good, I guess some people don't understand it so they don't give high marks. To me, this book is very interesting and the characters are described in detail. In the last part, I know that the divine bird wants Su Er to get married in order to repay his kindness. It is well-intentioned and reasonable. How can anyone say it is a bad ending? Besides, I won't be with Qingqing forever. All in all, it's worth watching. Regardless of the score, it's a good work in my opinion!

Author, can you be popular? [Crying] It's so beautiful [Crying] [Crying]

So is it double cleansing? Did that poppy have an affair with the palace lord of Donghai before?

Haha, it's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written article [full] I can really feel the delicacy between the lines and the emotions between the two protagonists. The images of each character are really well created [crying] It's not my fault. After reading the book for several years, this one can be ranked in the top ten. It is really rare in this mixed bag of tomatoes [learned] Reading the comments, some people said that the order of the front and back is out of order. After reading the whole article, I think the first half is more of a narrative and the second half is more of a prose. Each part has its own independence and will not be described in detail in every place. All in all, I am very happy to promote this book. I hope this book will become more and more popular, and the protagonist in the book can also have a stable and long-term relationship [top post]

I really think it's good-looking, with delicate emotions, vivid characterizations, and distinct personality traits. Overall, the rating is indeed low, which is a pity. (A bit like doing reading comprehension [full] [learned])

Very interesting, I wish the author a speedy success

Such a beautiful article must be pushed, and those who come in will definitely not regret it. There is no delay in the whole text, there are no pauses at critical moments, the writing style is delicate and smooth, the protagonist's image is three-dimensional, the emotions are rich and natural, the expression is not awkward at all, the supporting characters are full of flesh and blood, it is a completely different style of refreshing writing, I hope you will continue to work hard.