Aged Repeat Student Gets Mocked, but the School Beauty Begs Him for a Pact

So far, the subject matter and story are okay. It can be seen that the author's writing style is still a little immature. Some things are described in words that do not convey the meaning, or although they look strange or have problems, you can still understand what he wants to say. Then there are some conversations that are less colloquial and more written, but that's not a big problem. Although there are relatively few people speaking like this in real life, it's not impossible. I just want to say that if readers want to find fault, they can indeed find this as a thorn. But having said that, I already want to find fault, so why can't I find fault? I personally think the poisonous things mentioned in other works are okay, but some people can't stand it if a stranger (at the time) made up a lie to save his life; or the protagonist and his warriors chat and bicker and make jokes, which some people think is too watery and talks too much. Or maybe they just want the author to write a single female protagonist (actually, I can't understand this kind of thing the most. When I ask the author to write a single female protagonist or no female protagonist in a novel with multiple female protagonists/harem or something that seems to be this kind of content at first glance, I personally feel that there is something seriously wrong with my brain). So overall I feel pretty good, but judging from the content I've seen so far, although it can be seen that the author's wording is still relatively unsophisticated, I feel that the subject matter of the story is pretty good. The subject matter is quite novel and the story is okay Something really happened that cannot be written about. At least there is a metaphor or something to write about. I don't know what happened without reading the paragraph comment, although there are many people in the paragraph comment who don't know what happened... (12.28) Although you don't need any logic to read this kind of cool novel, you should at least have the right outlook on things. If you fall in love with a girl and you can't get along with her, you will take her to a dangerous place to show your strength and use your "relationship" to stop her. I think this behavior and logic are not that good. (12.30) Alas... (1.4)

Hahaha, red and hot, in a trance

The book is okay, the rating shouldn't be so low.

So far so good, good luck to the author!

This is a rare good book, I don't understand why the score is so low? I also hope that all viewers will rate the film based on their conscience. If they don't like having a female protagonist, they can take a detour. The author worked hard to write so much. Don't always have one star and bad reviews. If you don't like it, don't come in. It's beautiful, very beautiful, and it's clearly organized from now on. The main tasks and side tasks are written in detail and concisely, without any meaning of coding. At the same time, the theme is very clear. Although there are many female protagonists, there are different protagonists. Very good, very good.

So far, it's pretty good. Please support it.

There are very few typos and the names are not confusing, which is worthy of recognition. However, the plot is a bit too bland and single. The pleasure of revenge and the feeling of invincibility are not prominent enough, and the emotional foreshadowing and transformation are slightly abrupt. It feels that the tension is not enough, and it is almost delicate. However, it is still a very good novel. The author is very, very rigorous. It is worth reading.

It looks okay, but is this contract too much?

I like it very much, but the post-production was too rushed, and the characters are still a bit unclear, but that doesn't stop me from liking it.

Finally found a book that I can read hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha