The Moment My Heart Fluttered

It's pretty cool, but I don't know why the mainstream women's attitudes turned cold after they gave birth. I always feel that there is a misunderstanding. The female protagonist is also speechless. She won't say anything or ask questions. But it's really well written. Let's torture the male protagonist. I want to read [Adoration]

Not bad. Is the author a novice? If so, I think the writing is okay. I just hope that the progress of the plot can be faster. When can the male protagonist start chasing his wife? [Crazy] It made me a little anxious.

The names of the male and female protagonists are so nice! The plot is real and gradual, not abrupt or exaggerated! The characterization is impressive. Great! I hope the author will update it soon!

Can four chapters be updated every day? The author is [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

A novel describing the emotional entanglement between men and women. The hero and heroine are childhood sweethearts and have feelings for each other. An accident abroad led to the heroine becoming pregnant and having a miscarriage, which caused the relationship between the two to break up. The hero was calm and restrained, with superior intelligence. The heroine changed from a lively and cheerful girl to a sensitive, independent and self-respecting woman due to family changes. The two had misunderstandings but kept their thoughts deep in their hearts. The novel describes the emotional process and inner feelings of the two in detail. The characters have distinct personalities, the writing is fluent, and the mutual suspicion, misunderstanding and inability to let go of each other's feelings are well written. The novel is still being serialized, and the misunderstanding between the two people is gradually being solved. How it will develop in the future is worth reading!

Very nice! The writing style is very good, one of the few in Tomato that has a fresher style. I can't stand those kind of novels written by primary school students with a lot of bad sentences. The male and female protagonists have very upright views, and the plot really poked me.

This book is really good, I was misled by the score, the writing is not procrastinating, the sentences are humorous, and each character is interesting. Highly recommended

It's a very good book. I searched for it for a long time and found one with good writing. After reading it, it is the author's first book. Maybe this is his talent. . The writing is so comfortable that it is worth a thousand words, but the early plot is a bit sticky, and the handling of the past admiration-lost child-current divorce is a bit unclear, and the description ability is still a bit weak? It can be seen that they want to portray "because you have made me feel disappointed in the past, which leads to my disappointment in you now", and the emotional change of JQ towards the male protagonist later seems to be light. If the three-dimensional image of the two characters is 5 points, maybe it is only 3.5 Points. But it doesn't matter. . The whole text is very smooth and has no human-machine feel, which wins a lot. . Therefore give high marks. .

It's quite interesting. In the early stage when I was chasing my wife at the crematorium, I was so angry that I wanted to give up the story because of the male protagonist's behavior, but I continued to read it. In the early stage, the male protagonist tended to not know how to love someone. He was purely career-minded and liked to tell the truth, but the truth is ugly after all. Later, I slowly discovered that the heroine was very special to me, and I slowly learned to love someone. The heroine has always been good, and she has nothing to complain about. The two of them didn't open their mouths in the early stage. Because of a small misunderstanding, they both held back and thought that the other didn't want the child. It was much better after she said it. The ending was a bit rushed for me. It was quite satisfactory. Overall, the story was good.

Although the ending is happy, it feels like the female protagonist is still controlled by capital and succumbs to the male protagonist because of capital, instead of truly relying on her own abilities to gain recognition from society. The male protagonist also relies on the huge capital to help her influence her before slowly getting closer to him. Without these capitals, it will only become more chaotic if the two of them get close. I feel that the heroine is still like a dodder flower. If there is a problem between the two in the future, she will not even have anyone to rely on.