The Tycoon System Takes Me on a Wild Ride

Author, could you please break it down into paragraphs and add punctuation? It's making my head spin! The content is good, but there are huge blocks of text without punctuation, it's so messy and difficult to read for long. The content is really good though, so could you please revise it? 💕

Everything is fine, but the paragraphs are too long; sometimes I don't even want to read them. Also, could you shorten some of the introductions? They're too cumbersome to read. Please remember to break them into paragraphs.

It's really good, author, please keep writing!