Pokemon: Shadow of the Dawn

The Pokémon world depicted is very real. Pokémon are very powerful but need someone to command them. Humans also have technology to use. The writing is good, the plot flows smoothly and there are no obvious errors. The protagonist has a distinctive personality, is meticulous and cautious, and is one of the few characters in Tomato who does not cheat, has no system, and relies on his own Pokémon writing. But doesn't the author know that combat attribute skills are useless against ghosts? Looking at it, I feel like the author has never played the game. The Dragon King and Scorpion obviously don't have the insect type.

It's quite beautiful, it's very interesting without any system [Adoration]

Okay, okay, the writing is very good, the protagonist kills decisively, and the details of the elf battle are also very good. It is a high-quality elf novel. I recommend it.

I love reading it, but I can't help but want to lock the author in a dark room and write a letter to Ten Grains of Rice [Sending Hearts]

It's a very good book, one of the best among Pokémon, but the number of words is a bit short now, so I look forward to the author's steady updates.

Just focus on the protagonist, no system, no background, and rely on myself throughout the whole process, so I deserve a five-star rating. Uh... I looked back and felt that the protagonist was too murderous. Abandon the article.

It's okay. I don't feel it's so cruel at the end. I can barely count the 20 or so at the beginning. It is recommended that the pure black and dark streams be deleted. I think some ordinary ones are darker than this. The protagonist's brain sometimes disappears.

I think this book, in addition to the main line of raising Pokémon and climbing upwards, should also add a description of the protagonist's spiritual level, thoughts and spiritual changes between daily life plots and some activities. After all, no matter how outstanding the protagonist himself is, I think he will have a lot of emotions during this journey of wandering. I hope to see that the end of this book is not just a brief review of his path to becoming stronger, but also the bitter tears he paid on this path, and the emotion of finally reaching the top.

It's very good, the plot is coherent and reasonable, the protagonist's image is perfectly created, and the various plots are exciting. Although the supporting characters are not developed enough, I think this book can get at least an 8.5 Or 9.0 Rating. I always feel that someone is maliciously trying to score points [angry]

The early rhythm is very good, there are no bad points, the protagonist, villain and supporting characters all maintain their characters well, and there are many wonderful twists and turns. The clearer poisonous point is that after the villain disguised himself as the little girl's parents, he kidnapped the little girl and threatened the protagonist. The protagonist originally didn't want to take care of it, but Xiao A had to take care of it because of his kindness. At that time, I really wanted to give up the book, but I felt that the rhythm in the front was good, so I was reluctant to pursue it, so I pursued it. I think the pitfall in the later part was fixed (although I was still a little unhappy) In the later period, from pretending to be Hunter W to the final finale, the pace of the writing speeded up a lot. Every time he appeared, he just slapped people in the face and pretended to be brainwashed and conquered the legendary Pokémon. It was too similar and made me impatient. The length of the chapter about fighting Arceus seemed rather sloppy. The finale was also full of meaning. It felt like a very ordinary ending. But overall, it is a good book. Although the pace is much faster later, the writing style is also maintained, and there is no heroine. Although there is actually a female in it who wants to do something, but it has not been developed. If I insist on saying it, the pseudo-heroine Emri is so novel... But it is not bad. At least she is sincere to the protagonist and helps a lot. You can take a look