Turned into a White-Haired Little Girl, I Beg the Campus Beauty to Spare Me from the Start

It's so sweet. I smiled the whole time. That's why there are so few! It's not enough to watch! ! ! Also, why are there no pictures [angry][angry]

After reading it one after another, I can only give it 4 stars. Overall, it is "inaction", but it is also "no fault", which means it is ordinary, but there are not many poisonous points. Because the whole lacks a big world view, the reasons for some of the characters' actions are also unclear. For example, what is the system? Why can you be reborn? Why can the system convert between virtual and real? What is the motivation for the system? There are also some other minor problems, such as the roommate in the early stage who obviously has too few scenes in the later stage. The author's writing style cannot be considered bad, but it cannot be called the top level... In this case, the article lacks a main clue to promote the plot. It is also rare to reach the word count of a medium-length novel. It should be very uncomfortable to write. Also in the later period, after the protagonist's potion was broken and discovered, the heroine's reaction was obviously different from normal people, as if she knew the existence of the system. In short, the system was obviously the biggest loophole. And when the protagonist first takes it, the source of the heroine's sleepy black tea is also very doubtful. Psychotropic drugs are generally controlled substances. Even if they can be obtained through a strong capital background, the protagonist's reaction afterwards is very strange. Normal people may have emotions such as fear, nervousness, sadness, surprise, and anger. Inaction, no fault, I think that is the best evaluation Let me add that there is also a problem with the description of appearance. The author seems to want to portray the cuteness of the protagonist or the beauty of the heroine, but maybe it is a problem with the tone of voice, maybe the description of the environment is not done well, maybe the direct description of appearance is not well-chosen. Until the end, I can only have a vague image of them. What do they look like? I don't know. Not to mention other supporting characters, there is no such person. Maybe the most vivid person is Father Lin. In just a few strokes, he portrays the image of a traditional gentleman, who doesn't talk much and is taciturn. But she always works silently behind the scenes, provides support to the family, serves as a bridge to regulate family relationships, loves to read newspapers, All in all, I spent a lot of time reading it completely, and finally I wrote a long review, which can be considered a good goodbye. The novel always feels like the writing style of a few years ago, or even longer. According to the judging standards at that time, it can be regarded as good.

All I can say is that this book is very sweet, even though there is no male protagonist... It's just that the update is a bit slow (the donkeys in the production team can't rest like this [smile][smile])

1 Delicate brushwork depicts the rich emotions in the characters' hearts, making people feel as if they are immersed in the scene and experiencing the joys and sorrows with the protagonist. In these stories, love is endowed with endless possibilities, making people believe that the power of true love can overcome all difficulties. 2. Several characteristics of sticking to the theme in chronological order and proceeding step by step. In these touching stories, readers can enjoy the joys, sorrows and joys and feel the richness of life. It not only provides leisure and relaxation reading, but also enriches our spiritual world to a certain extent. I feel good after reading it, and the author will continue to update it

It's beautiful, and it awakened a strange attribute in me. The characters in it are unique and flavorful [laughing][laughing][laughing]

How can I put it, so far, the whole book is still very good. It can be said that it is one of the few books that has successfully created characters. The characters' thoughts and moods are also arranged and described very well. The storyline is also very exciting. Most boys like to read it (all of them understand it), and the content is also very humorous, so it is worth reading.

A good book about Lily. Although this is the first time I read Lily, I have also found several books later. It is indeed not as good as this one. It is more everyday. My aunt never stopped laughing. It is worth recommending. It is recommended by 1300 hours of bookworms online.

It's so beautiful. I really recommend it. I hope the author won't do it later.

It's nice to start with the costume, and add the setting of having no father or mother, skipping directly to the plot of meeting the parents. Some books also change to hundreds, but after the change, there are a lot of things to do. Some books handle this part well, but some books do not handle it well, and there are too many troubles. This book just goes straight to time travel and becomes hundreds, and also adds the setting of no family. In this way, as long as one party agrees, they can get married directly, and the two of them will spend more time together. They don't have the stubbornness of parents and the time to get along and understand with some family members. As long as one party understands, you can also interpret it as laziness, but this is quite good. There are less tedious things, and it is sweet to the end. It looks really good. I recommend it.

It's so beautiful, hehe, it needs five stars. More updates won't be enough [laughter]