From the Start, I Was a Reionics

A lot of poison 1: First, the punctuation marks. Is there nothing else except commas and periods? Will adding double quotes kill it? What do you think? 2: Regarding the title of the character, Raymond calls himself Lei, and his teammates also call him that. Isn't it awkward for you to just call him Raymond? And Hinata, he doesn't like his crew to call him Hinata directly, they all call him boss, but you just call him Hinata, as if they are all strangers. Three: The fighting and other plots are a bit nonsensical. The Jetton star at the beginning seems to have done nothing but send monsters. After all, he is also an intelligent race. How could he be so stupid? To sum up, there is really nothing to read. Anyway, I think there is nothing to read. The author should be a newcomer. You should learn from your seniors in the industry. You should revise this book, otherwise it will not achieve any results. Of course, if the author wrote it for fun, then just treat it as if I didn't say it.

Yes, yes, but author, can you please type all the punctuation marks correctly? It seems uncomfortable to speak without punctuation marks, but the rest is fine.

I have been fooled by 5 stars a lot, and I have developed a good habit. No matter how ugly or rubbish I am, I will give 5 stars. As an old bookworm, although I am immune to all poisons, I cannot try poison alone. There is you, there is me, there is everyone. Let's all drink together! I have been fooled by 5 stars a lot, and I have developed a good habit. No matter how ugly or rubbish I am, I will give 5 stars. As an old bookworm, although I am immune to all poisons, I cannot try poison alone. There is you, there is me, there is everyone. Let's all drink together! I have been fooled by 5 stars a lot, and I have developed a good habit. No matter how ugly or rubbish I am, I will give 5 stars. As an old bookworm, although I am immune to all poisons, I cannot try poison alone. There is you, there is me, there is everyone. Let's all drink together! I have been fooled by 5 stars a lot, and I have developed a good habit. No matter how ugly or rubbish I am, I will give 5 stars. As an old bookworm, although I am immune to all poisons, I cannot try poison alone. There is you, there is me, there is everyone. Let's all drink together!

The author is looking at those punctuation marks. Don't you like them? Characters' dialogues don't need to be framed by colons. It's really tiring to watch.

There are no commas, periods, or double quotes throughout the text. It's okay to write a story about something like Leonix. It covers the Ultra Universe, the Brother Corpse Universe, and the Marvel Zombie Universe. You can read it when you're bored.

I like watching it, it's very good

In the adult world, there is never the word "easy"

It's the ultimate life form [laughing awkwardly] even a child can steal your things at will

Can you type punctuation marks?

Not bad, not bad, come on!