The Star God King

I am a new author. This is my first time writing a novel. I don't know what stories you like to read. I just want to write out what I think in my heart. If you have any other ideas, you can comment. I accept the comments with an open mind. If you think it is good, please support it, rate it and like it. Your support and encouragement are the motivation for me to continue writing. I would like to thank you all.

The overall rhythm of the novel "Fantasy World" is still very good, the characters are very fleshed out, the settings are rich and logical, and the growth path and identity of the protagonist Luo Yichen are also well laid out. It is a fantasy novel worth reading carefully. I recommend everyone to read it [laugh][laugh][laugh]

How many chapters does the author plan to write? I just want to make a suggestion. When writing about female characters, the author should not always write about the stunning appearance and the all-powerful appearance, which will cause visual fatigue. When describing the strength, there is no need to always write about how powerful it is. Some of them can be highlighted by side descriptions. Also, when the male protagonist awakens the star pulse, I think the awakening process is too bland (personal opinion, please forgive me!!). I think since it is a top-level talent, it should be different from others when awakening. There will be some famous scenes, such as the light is stronger than others when awakening, and it is a bit far-fetched to awaken from the age of six to thirteen years old. Personally, I feel that some content transitions can be made (just my personal opinion, please forgive me [laugh][laugh])

Author, when will the heroine regain her memory? She won't have to wait until the protagonist is half-dead to regain her memory [crying]

Looks pretty good so far

Rich content and vivid character descriptions

The imagination is quite big, the logic is also very good, the plot and content are well written and very interesting.

Can you continue to update?

It's OK in the front, but I don't know in the back.

The setting is novel, I like it very much. The scene is not destructive enough, and it doesn't feel like there is much tension. Overall pretty good. The atmosphere is well rendered.