Reborn as a Zombie Loli, I Was Abducted by the School Bully from the Start

Give yourself a boost. It's not a change of marriage. I will accept corrections for negative reviews, but please don't start a fight with other readers. After all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage.

The current reading is quite good. In the early stage, it may be because the author's writing progress was a bit fast at the beginning, but it gradually slowed down after a dozen chapters. The characters are all pretty good, and they all have their own characteristics. So far, there are no plot points, and they are not very clichéd. They mainly focus on finding relatives. The plot is mixed with the end of the world and daily life, but it will probably be more depressing and tense in the later stages. Be careful not to change your marriage. If you don't like it, you can leave. Don't worry about the rhythm. Finally, I hope the author will not stop updating because of the lack of people, at least... Not like before...

Give me one more chapter, just one, I feel like there are ants crawling all over me now! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, please author, please update another chapter! Ahhhhhhhhh

It made me so angry when I saw it [laughing and crying]. The protagonist has a lot of bad attributes, such as cowardice, cowardice, daring not to admit his identity, evasion, etc. It is true that he has many bad qualities, and he didn't even realize it. But the plot is good and the author can let me see a full-fledged character.

As a southerner, I feel that the northern flavor is overflowing from the screen.

Overall, it's pretty good. The writing is good and I can feel that it was written with care. It's just that the plot is a bit tiring to watch. One is that the pace is too fast and I don't feel the obvious plot divisions, which are a bit scattered. The second is that there are too many supporting characters, but none of them stand up completely. If there are too many supporting characters, you will forget them, but there are new supporting characters. The constant appearance of supporting characters has led to the supporting characters being a bit overshadowed in the portrayal of people. Especially in the later period, new supporting characters appeared and the old supporting characters were thrown into the warehouse. In addition to the two protagonists, there is a lack of a "big supporting character" who can have a relatively complete story and background. The most uncomfortable part is the part in the later period when Su Yuan is suffering. Admittedly, it makes sense to include such a part, and the character of Su Yuan will be more fleshed out. However, one is that this depressing plot is too long, and it is slightly inconsistent with the tone of the previous part, which makes me feel uncomfortable to watch. Then there is the plot advancement. Sometimes the system will suddenly add some settings, which are a bit abrupt without foreshadowing. Of course, this is harmless if you don't watch it with your brain.

To me, the overall impression is good, but the pace is slow in the front and fast in the back, maybe because the author is impatient due to poor data. Overall, the plot is good, the characters are relatively clear, but it is too rushed and not all are expressed. But yes, novels that are about to be completed with more than 250 chapters generally don't have much character development, but this book does have a lot of supporting characters. Unlike those apocalyptic novels that destroy the three views, this one pays more attention to the brilliance of human nature. There is no narration in the text to describe the author's own point of view, and it relies entirely on the plot. However, the fact that the protagonist is a zombie is indeed a bit different. It may be a special zombie. After all, it is a transformation story. If it is ugly, no one will read it. However, it would be better if the author highlights the zombies more. Generally speaking, it is not a dark and enjoyable story that kills innocent people indiscriminately. It is relatively optimistic. Those 9:00-point novels are much more humane at every turn, but the author is a novice, and the writing style and plot need to be improved. I can only say that this is my opinion.

I finished reading it in one sitting, it's really beautiful! I was so emotional when I saw the ending.

I think it's quite interesting. I watched it in one go and the plot is quite good. I hope the author will update it soon [crazy] [crazy] [crazy]

Overall, it's a very good work~ It's obvious that the author has put a lot of effort into the character creation. It's very delicate. It's really very delicate. Has the author considered trying romance? He likes to see girls post pictures and drive cars when they have candy and knives. The time-travel setting is very exciting, the psychological shaping and conception are clever. You really need to use your brain to substitute for the characters. I wonder how many times the author has played re0 hahahahahahahaha There is nothing too bad about the world view, but there are relatively few dramatic conflicts and more in-depth settings, and the battle scenes are relatively monotonous (there are not enough exciting places), which is still very good for a short story. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]