[Play the pig to eat the tiger + villainous Saint Son + no mindless plot + decisive and ruthless + rebellious disciple]
Gu Qingyu transmigrates, only to be killed by the person he loves most on the very next day.
Five hundred years later, Gu Qingyu is reborn as the Saint Son of the Tai Xuan Sacred Land, and finds himself a father.
That day, he is sold to an immortal maiden as her disciple. But she doesn't want him as a student: she's after his body.
For twenty-six years on Blue Star, Gu Qingyu kept himself pure just to stay by someone's side.
Now he's only sixteen, and his master, that old woman, has ruined him.
The Tai Xuan Sacred Land is full of dangers. Someone is always trying to harm him.
Gu Qingyu can only sigh: “When will I finally get a break?”
Gu Qingyu: “Dad, how much did you sell me for?”
His father holds up his middle finger. “This much!”
Gu Qingyu ventures a guess: “A hundred million... premium... spirit stones?”
Gu Youming shakes his head. “Son, you have to be realistic! Don't aim too high. Just take the word ‘million’ off that number.”
Just take the word ‘million’ off that number... (repeated three times)
Gu Youming shakes his head. “Son, cultivation is about keeping your feet on the ground. Now take away the words ‘spirit stones.’”
Gu Qingyu: “One gold coin?”
Gu Youming still shakes his head. “Son, you're overestimating yourself. One copper coin!”
In his mind: One copper coin! (repeated countless times)
Gu Qingyu's eyes roll back, and he collapses.
Damn it, I'm worth one copper coin?
You treacherous master!
You treacherous father!
She has great potential; keep writing.
It's okay, but I'm a little dizzy. One heart is missing, the content of this clone is a bit... 🤦🤦🤦
The characters in other storylines could be developed in more detail.
Looks pretty good! Keep it up!
The content is good, but there are some problematic aspects.
It has great potential, keep writing it well and don't leave it unfinished.