Going Viral on a Dating Show with My Childhood Friend, a Top-Tier Star

After all, this is the author's first time writing a book, so it's acceptable, but I would like to make a small comment here. I just felt a little uncomfortable while reading the book. It felt like the author wanted to shape the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and then the others were very similar to the control group. Whether it was the program team or the other three groups of couples, they all felt that they wanted to be the protagonist. It looks like it will turn into a black and red route, but I think this kind of thing will definitely not happen in reality, unless it is forced. The overall look of this book is that the author's writing style is very good, the writing style is very delicate, and it deserves praise. However, in this book, the handling of emotions and the writing of the plot, I think it can still be strengthened. These are just my personal opinions and small suggestions for the author [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] No malice [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] If the author can improve some of these issues in the later period, I think this will be a good book

This must be the author's first time writing an online novel. The male and female protagonists are established well. The core of their personality really touches my point. The supporting characters are also very three-dimensional. The interpretation of love is very unique. It is not the kind of funny and overbearing romance novels that are common in Tomato. There are many lyrical paragraphs, and in some places It's a bit cumbersome, which affects the overall fluency of the article. It doesn't feel like the style of an online article, and looks a bit like a novice's article (but it's not that the writing is poor, it may be a cohesion problem, which feels like a common problem for many novices) (the references in some places are not very clear, he She can sometimes make people's eyes blur, and I have also seen a situation where she is suspected of swallowing the subject), but overall it does not affect the viewing experience. After all, the author's in-depth exploration of the characters is really eye-catching. If you don't have high requirements for the smoothness of the writing, then my evaluation is very, very, very, very worth reading. Continuing from the last comment, after about chapter 60, the author's metaphors have obviously decreased, the whole text has become much smoother, and the plot line should be coming out soon (looking forward to it).ᐟ.ᐟ

The writing seems to be in a literary style, but it's a bit pretentious, but the characters and plot are good.

The author actually uses a lot of metaphors, but the writing style is also beautiful, so I continued reading. There is a light feeling between the birds and the fishes. The most exciting scene I saw was when the egret returned home in the first part, and in the later part they felt like they were an old couple, hahaha. But it really feels like a huge blessing to those who used to be singers but can no longer sing. Everyone enters the circle for their dreams, but there are too many people who can't help themselves. Xiaoyu has become their carrier and continues to sing. However, in the end, I hope that the author can be direct and profound when writing about his feelings. Simple words and sentences can actually express profound emotions. I sometimes feel that the detailed description of the protagonist is quite cumbersome. For example, I found it difficult to watch the interview. Not only was the host's progress slow, but there were many detailed descriptions. The host's questions were actually very tit-for-tat, and the questions still seemed cumbersome, a bit like a The topic asked three people for their opinions, and then the guests chatted with each other. It can be seen that they wanted to narrate and change the psychological process of the guests, but there was no clear feeling in terms of perception. Sometimes they always had to stop and carefully taste what they meant. At the same time, the barrage did not complain about the point, which made me feel more fragmented. When I read the whole article, I actually felt like the breeze was blowing and the wind chimes were ringing, but it also gave me a feeling that it was difficult to read the words and sentences, and it was very laborious to read.

How can I put it, I feel that the author's writing style is quite good, but I may only be suitable for reading cool articles. I always feel very boring when reading this article, plus the shaping of other CPs. When I first read it, I really felt that other CPs were very annoying. This kind of writing may not be suitable for me. In short, I still hope that the author will continue to work hard [Sending Hearts]

It's very interesting. Thank you for coming across such a thoughtful book. At first I thought it was a bland idea from the beginning. Maybe you will have a fight in the love show, or you may go crazy and ambiguous in the love show, and the audience will howl. The purpose of clicking in is to relax. But I didn't expect to encounter a high-scoring variety show that could be rated 9.0 In reality. Director Zhou really has a lot of humanistic feelings hahahaha. Later, the essence of love was gradually discerned in the author's words of constant self-questioning. When the author asked: before all the things and symbols describing "love" appeared, in the beginning, why did people want to "be together". Maybe it's just about supporting each other to survive. When the cost of survival decreases and people begin to pursue spiritual life, being with one person is also to fill their own spiritual vacancies. I really like the author's description of love: the love between two people is complicated, not just desire or sensory stimulation. The love of family, the love of friendship, and the love of romance are all descriptions of love. This is what I gained from reading this novel. I have a new understanding of love. Of course, the author wrote a lot of lyrical sentences at the beginning that were eager to describe the relationship between the two people, which was a bit difficult to interpret, and gave me a little sluggish feeling in my reading. However, because I tend to read the text in a hurry, the shortcomings are not concealed. The more I write, the more I feel that the author understands the characters in the novel more and more. The characters gradually develop their own flesh and blood, and naturally it becomes smoother and smoother.

4⭐, Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's writing is beautiful and romantic, with the delicate and warm feeling of Korean dramas. In the novel, the male protagonist is compared to a possessive but cautious mermaid, and the female protagonist is compared to a pair of emotionally timid but free-flying birds. This is a love between fish and bird. The lovers who go in both directions are wasted due to misunderstandings. The relationship is warm and frustrating, but the disadvantage is that the plot rhythm is too slow and the conflict is not exciting enough. Although the supporting roles are designed The author is ingenious, but the presentation skills are not enough, so it feels a bit awkward (I personally think that one of the other three pairs of CPs can be removed and put in the follow-up variety show. There are too many threads buried now, and their stories are too fragmented to tell. For example, the relationship between siblings and fake CPs, the team of the boss can be placed in the follow-up variety show). In addition, the description of the relationship is a bit tired of being repeated over and over again. In general, it is a sweet pet novel, and there are many books to read.

Super, super, super good-looking. The love story in this book is different from other books. There is no so-called female competition. Everyone has different purposes for participating, and the character of each person is well portrayed. After reading the article, I also found that love is complicated, and everyone's way and understanding of love are also different. , But our fish and birds really moved me. I really recommend it. It will be updated soon. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

To be honest, the author's writing style is really good! Literary skills are very profound. I sometimes think about why there are novels that I can't read and words that I can't read. When I saw this novel, I vaguely understood that when we read the novel and read the full text, we are reading the author's three views and the author's emotional value flow. Through this book, I felt that the author, at least during the time of this book, was probably an emotional person, and even a highly sensitive person. The paintings are painted with many strong and intuitive emotional flows and dazzling sensory experiences. Much like infp(?) I stopped and slowed down several times in the middle of this novel. Because the emotional fluctuations in my character are not strong, I felt a lot of discomfort when encountering this text. I finished reading it after taking my time. It has the feeling of a micro-group portrait, depicting many kinds of love in different shapes. I also followed the text to witness the character background, growth and changes of each member of the protagonist group. There are many "I"s in the world. In other words, love can exist in any form, and so can "I".

It's okay. Until I read Chapter 52, I felt a little strange [facepalm]. I'd say it's a sweet story, but it's okay. If you say it's a cool story, it's not very satisfying. I even felt it was a bit suspenseful. There are many literary descriptions, which are a little wordy, but there are many golden sentences. It was a bit frustrating to read, maybe it's because I'm more suited to fast-paced, refreshing writing.