World of Hope: A Professional NPC from the Start

It's good, but those two siblings are a bit too much, right? If you don't care, you are not a rich boy. The protagonist seems to have a brain and is quite smart. Common sense should know to be more careful, right? It's normal to accept inner defenses again. It's not like family members, friends of more than ten years are also defensive. Overall, it's very good, but the two siblings are really a little unhappy [sending heartfelt messages]

Come on! Five-star praise! As long as updates continue or the ending is unfinished, I will continue to follow them until they are completed.

The setting of this book is very novel. The protagonist is both a player and an NPC, and the writing is quite good. I don't think there's any problem with the protagonist's combat power. Some people say the protagonist is too weak, but there's nothing she can't defeat except the current princess. I think the combat power is fine, just do what you like. If you really get angry about the issue of combat power... Hello, members of the mysterious organization! Regarding the problem of a weak protagonist in your book, I can give you some suggestions for strengthening your protagonist's presence and story appeal. 1. Shape the character characteristics of the protagonist: Give the protagonist a unique personality so that readers can empathize with them and resonate with them. Character traits can be bravery, intelligence, kindness, persistence, etc., Which will make the protagonist more attractive. 2. Strengthen the growth of the protagonist: In the story, let the protagonist continue to face challenges and gradually grow into a stronger person through hard work and struggle. This setting allows readers to grow together with the protagonist and experience the growth process and joy. 3. Set up a complex life background: Create a rich and diverse life experience for the protagonist, which can include family background, growth environment, family ties, friendships and other factors. This will make the protagonist's image more three-dimensional and help resonate with readers. 4. Increase the protagonist's decision-making and actions: Let the protagonist play a key role in the story, participate in important decisions, and take practical actions. In this way, readers will be more likely to get involved in the story and get through the difficulties with the protagonist. 5. Describe the inner world of the protagonist: By describing the inner conflicts and emotional fluctuations of the protagonist, readers can better understand the inner world of the protagonist. This will flesh out the protagonist and make it easier for readers to relate to. 6. Learn from successful cases: Refer to the popular protagonist images in other works, analyze their advantages, learn from them appropriately and combine them with your creativity to create a unique protagonist. Hope the above suggestions are helpful to you. During the creative process, you can keep trying and adjusting to find the writing style and protagonist settings that work best for you. Good luck with your creation! If you have any other questions, please feel free to ask me.

It's very interesting. I am very attentive to my readers. I will reply to every post and consider every suggestion carefully. I like this subject very much. I rarely find articles about female NPCs that suit my preferences, but this one is ok. I hope it will be greatly improved. I will update N chapters every day haha ​​[sending heart] [blowing kiss] [please update]

Very good. Although the writing skills are slightly lacking, at least for brainless slaps in the face, it is still very exciting. Although some places are relatively brainless, it is understandable. For example, there is a plot where our protagonist enters the village chief's house without switching NPC identities, but passers-by do not notice much abnormality. If it were changed to hiding in a corner that is ignored. Then, switch to the NPC identity, and then walk into the village chief's house. It will be much better now. After all, no one except the paparazzi will be squatting at the door of the village chief's house, and the paparazzi cannot always pay attention there. With a slight change, it can be slightly reasonable and logical. The topic changes back, and the overall content is more daily. Except for the few updated chapters, it is basically There aren't many exciting battle scenes. It seems like there are two female protagonists at the moment. However, the general readers of Baihe novels may have higher requirements. One side may like one pair of CPs, and the other side may like another pair of CPs. Blindly accepting readers' opinions is often more likely to lead to failure. Accepting readers' opinions in an appropriate amount is a good choice. You can also add some fans' requests in the article. Guest characters, but you need to pay attention to the strength of the characters. These old methods are good for dealing with some casual readers and some new readers, but old bookworms will not eat these. For the time being, I can only think of so much, let's stop here~ If the author sees this comment, then although some of the above content may not be accurate, there is always a little bit that can be referenced.

I believe the author's book will become popular. Come on, author, and happy New Year [smile]

The update is a bit slow, and I hope the drama system has more interaction with the heroine. It feels very interesting [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's well written. Except for the boring plot at the beginning, the characters' memories in the later segments are very easy to evoke emotions. It's impeccable. However, the article is too compact and difficult to express in the highlights, and it's a bit short. I hope there can be more chapters and more words.

Good review, come on the author

Personally I feel pretty good, cheers for the author [Like]