Screw Being a Saint, I'm a Doctor

The plot is similar to the comic "Fuck the Holy Son, This is Modern Medicine"!

I don't understand what the author is writing at all. There is no introduction or details. There is only what the protagonist created. How awesome and NB. After reading more than ten chapters, I still don't know what the author wants to express. At least I can introduce what the world is like after wearing it. I'm speechless.

Problem 1: Confusing names - he was confused with her many times, and the names were confusing. Problem 2: The description is confusing - the causes and consequences are weak and pale, and the content is skinny Reply to question 1: It's more serious at the beginning of the plot and less so in the later stages. Reply to question 2: It's not serious, it's a common problem among newbies. I suggest you go for further training.

It's messy, not fluent, and the personal dialogue is sparsely written. It feels like writing essays in elementary school, and it's hard to write. Author, can you understand what I mean? [Cover face]

It's quite self-indulgent. If you want to write a western fantasy background, please set it more carefully. Otherwise, what's the difference between it and toilet paper?

I think the writing is okay, but there are too many typos. People's names, names of you, me, and others are always reversed, and there are many wrong sentences that I can't understand.