This Disciple Is No Ordinary One

I've finished reading it. The writing is okay and the plot is okay. I suggest that not so many women like the protagonist.

I think it's very good, especially the setting of destiny. If "Black Myth: Wukong" is released later, the popularity may be much better. Those who are destined to see this must look at this! However, there were a lot of foreshadowings. Although I knew that Gu Yun was invincible from the beginning and was quite capable of pretending, it was not particularly satisfying. Because of the insufficient understanding of Gu Yun's abilities and personality, some of his actions were surprising. At present, we don't see a particularly clear growth line. It might be better to look a little further. Black Gu Yun is more like a man of destiny, while Bai Gu Yun is not only invincible but also seems to have no desires and desires. Although he has some cute features, he is generally not like a human being. Therefore, the fact that he is called Lady Lin Mu and that he cares about Xun Shishi's life makes me feel very disconnected. It's a pity that this book was not completed according to the author's ideas. If it were completed, there might be no need for a second book. The first one would be the pioneering work. In fact, I think it would be better if the humanoid pendant of Xun Shishi was replaced by a pet pendant like Fox Xiaoyu. Because it was not specifically stated clearly why she wanted to follow Gu Yun. She couldn't leave Gu Yun because of love, and Gu Yun didn't want her to leave because of love. If it was because of love, it would be very estranged, or because it was untenable to think that she was a senior sister, because the audience knew very well that she was not a senior sister at all. Therefore, Gu Yun's attitude towards her could not convince readers, so many readers did not like her and therefore abandoned the article.

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Why do I feel like the following chapters are going in a weird direction?

Well written, keep it up, it looks very interesting

I think it's okay.

Well, it seems that the regret medicine is an important clue.

Dihuawen is still good-looking The pace was a bit too fast, and many people passed by without even realizing it.

Is the master the protagonist or the apprentice? Why are all the disciples wandering around?

The structure is rigorous, the layers are rich, and it is quite funny. It is the best among short films.