Tomb Raiding: From the Start, I Have Every Secret Technique and Livestream My Archaeology

It's a bit messy, it feels like the author just wrote whatever came to mind. Yingzi is really distracting, she seems like she'll be a drag on the story.

As a Northeasterner, I really can't accept saying that a yellow-skinned monkey should be Huang Daxian (the Yellow Immortal) [what][what][what]. That's a bit outrageous, isn't it?

I don't understand what it says.

It was written in a mess and contained many typos.

This book is supposed to be about tomb raiding, but it's suddenly got some elements from "Under One Person" (a popular Chinese web novel series). And it even has elements of the "Outcast" (another popular Chinese web novel series). I don't even know what this book is about anymore. Is it about tomb raiding or about Outcasts?

Can you delete some numbers?

Um... I read eight chapters and couldn't keep going. The logic was flawed, the beginning was confusing, and then there were two women—was this tomb raiding and archaeology about to start a harem? I hate this kind of thing. Goodbye.

Mom's just a nanny. What's so interesting about her?

I've seen messy things, but never anything this messy. It's all written in a jumbled mess.

You wrote a tomb-raiding novel in your live stream. What was your original intention in creating Yingzi? Was it to stop the plot from developing? The protagonist has been turned into a simp.