Cultivating Immortality in the City, Starting with Taking Disciples

The book is good, but it lacks a section on self-reflection; otherwise, it could contain all sorts of bizarre elements.

To be honest, it looks pretty good so far, with a few minor issues in some areas, but they're not serious. The score is obviously too low.

This is the best modern cultivation novel ever. The level of sophistication and the level of intelligence are both top-notch. I hope the author keeps updating! My only regret is not finding this novel sooner; if I had, I could have read it all at once!

I think this book is good, at least I quite like it, but undeniably it does have some flaws. Perhaps I don't read many books of this type, or for other reasons, but I felt it was alright. Five stars is also an encouragement; I hope the author will revise any problematic parts. Keep it up!

The design concept is alright, but some people might not like it. Objectively speaking, it's probably just average. Of course, from my perspective, I think it's just average because I like the cold-blooded kind of story. This is just my personal opinion, though. Overall, though, the book is okay. This is my follow-up comment.

It's alright, I'll give it 5 stars to show my support 🍉

I hope the protagonist doesn't get involved with his eldest disciple.

It's pretty good. I don't really care about the flaws in books; I just get annoyed sometimes when I see operations I don't understand. I don't have that book yet. There's no need to be too picky when reading. If you're too meticulous, just stick to the classics.

I can't be the only one who gets poisoned.

It looks nice, but something feels off. The apprenticeship trial is too easy; anyone could just walk through it. How about changing it to a single-player illusion realm? The difficulty level could be increased a bit. 🙂