Hong Kong Crossover: In Hung Hing, I Have the Golden Bell Shield

It's okay, but you need to think about segmentation.

The most well-planned Young and Dangerous book I have ever read, with quarterly meetings, annual meetings, and annual goals.

The writing is good, but I regret two problems. The first problem is that the starting system forcibly restricts the protagonist from completing tasks like a marionette puppet. The system is completely soy sauce in the later stage and has a low sense of presence. The second problem is the treatment of internal problems. The Jiang brothers, the leaders of Hongxing, have repeatedly provoked and calculated the protagonist. Kill the protagonist. The protagonist has endured many times. The protagonist is also a character in the time-traveling system. He must be fair-faced and have a certain amount of anger. Not to mention leaving the enemy to plot against the other party in the future. If you don't deal with the internal enemies, how can you keep them to cause trouble for yourself? If you have revenge, you must have a clear mind! Come on, support! Hongxing's internal problems, the protagonist is speechless no matter how much he tolerates the leader's provocation and commits suicide. Don't repeat the plot of intrigues and intrigues!

You're kind, you scumbag fit person. Just write "fit". Otherwise, you might as well write "hall master".

The part about withdrawing money from the bank made me laugh to death.

It is really a completely different Hong Kong comprehensive novel. Monk's novel does use too much force, but the two female protagonists are still acceptable. There are a lot of mindless suggestions on the market, which is too boring. The highlight of this book is the process of the dragon and the phoenix each time. Even if there is a tip, it is different every time. It is funny and refreshing. It is really a different fireworks under the template of a refreshing article. I am looking forward to reading it and I am very happy! I have watched a lot of Tomato's Hong Kong drama series, and most of them are undercover backgrounds. There are very few stories where the male protagonist is a pure gangster and the heroine is a pseudo-single heroine. I scored 7 points but I still feel unfinished after seeing the finale. It would be great to see a story like this every month that makes you feel relaxed and happy. [Praise]

Very interesting writing, five stars support

The story is very exciting. The monk's story is actually quite good. As long as the plot is well designed, it doesn't matter whether there is a female protagonist or not. The level of hooking up is not too big or too small. It's just right. It's well-written and not as boring as killing dozens of people at once. It summarizes the casualties in one go.

It makes people read it. After reading this book, it is indeed okay. It is not a magical book. It is okay to read without reading the book. The writing style is still a bit weak. The pace of the story is sometimes slow and sometimes too fast. The ending is not very satisfactory. I hope the author can slowly improve and go further to publish a popular book.

Not bad. If you don't sleep with a woman in the early stage, the system will deduct one star for the heroine.