After Quick Transmigration, the Pitiful One Is Sweet and Soft

During this period, I also felt the improvement of the author's writing style. The characters and stories in the small world in the article are becoming more fleshed out. It was initially set that the protagonist was bisexual and had a special constitution that could lead to pregnancy. The protagonist's character is not perfect but is gradually growing. I am still looking forward to the follow-up world. But some questions affected me a bit when I read the article. Regarding the latest gender-reversed world, although I am not opposed to gender indeterminacy, isn't this article a dual-male protagonist setting? I don't understand why there is a series of sexual transformations in the world now, so I am confused. I'm also very confused about whether 0521 has become the main system and why it still doesn't have any capabilities. At the same time, I have never clarified some of the conflicts between the 0521 and Cookie systems, and the conflict in the sex transfer world transfer station, which feels a bit abrupt. There is always a feeling that the author has a lot of imagination, and the small world is a work of practice, and he does not want to end the story in a hurry and change to a new world. But I saw that the author is working diligently to update a few chapters tomorrow, and I feel like it's not [face covering] [face covering] I don't know why the more I watch, the more confused I become, and the main plot is also very confusing. I don't understand a little bit what the mission goal of the system is and what the meaning of its existence is.

The plot is very novel, and Tian Jiao is really great. In fact, the title of the book is not very correct. Tian Jiao will not forget the grievances and humiliations he suffered in the early stage just because he was nice to him in the later stage. I'm particularly disgusted by the situation where you bully someone in the early stage and then suddenly change someone and ask the bullied person to like you, because the bullied person doesn't know that person has changed, and no matter how good he becomes later, he won't like him (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). Fortunately, this novel is not the case. Tian Jiao will not forget his original intention and stick to his principles at all times.

Super pretty! ! ! This article should only exist in heaven, how long will it come down to earth! ! ! Much updated! ! [Send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

Sometimes I feel that the main character suffers a bit too much, and the system is also a bit slow. Looking back, I feel that no one is perfect, and the protagonist and system are slowly growing. But I can feel that the writing is gradually getting better and the settings are gradually improving. Overall, it is still a relatively good novel. Come on!

Overall, the content of the book is great and the subject matter is also good. Although the title of the book contains the word "little pitiful", you may think that the protagonist is weak, but in fact the protagonist is still very tough inside. He does not rely entirely on others, and he is also growing. Of course, not all planes in the book are good-looking, but most planes are written well, and not every plane has CP. The protagonist's system is almost the same as not having it, and it basically cannot help much. It depends more on the protagonist himself. If you don't like the big gold finger, you can try this book.

It's okay. The plot of the small world is relatively fresh and not so cliched, but I don't recommend it. Each world can be read as an independent story. They are not the same person and have different personalities. In addition, some of the small worlds are unclean and the emotional lines are not clear. There are not many worlds where they get together at the end of the plot without falling in love. So each world can be read as a short story. There is no connection. I feel like I just write whatever comes to my mind.

I haven't seen it clearly for a while now. I want to know what will happen to that King of Hell system [eating melon]

Such a beautiful article, why are there so few people? I don't understand [what] [what]

So beautiful, I cried to death in the second world

It looks so good~ Come on~