Douluo Dalu: Awakening the Four Ancient Ferocious Beasts from the Start

It's okay. The author believes that although your writing is not very good, your Chinese language skills should be pretty good.

It's okay. Although the protagonist kills decisively and is not verbose, the writing style is not very good. But he is a new author after all. The rating is four stars, which is not bad. The author will add more 😳, come on, write better articles [send heartfelt].

This book is not bad, but there are some places that need to be changed. I don't need to tell you what they are, the author. I also hope that the author can do his best and update it as soon as possible 🤦 🤦 🤦

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on. Author

Author I hope you keep writing, I feel good

I'm a native dog and I love watching!!

This is written from a first-person perspective, not like writing but like telling something. I don't really like this kind of thing, but the author's writing is pretty good 👍

Come on, come on, come on