Observer of the End: Playing Cards on the Moon with Kiki

I read Chapter 43 in one go. To be honest, I felt really good. (So I'll update soon...) I haven't read many Qibao fanfics with a single heroine. There are two reasons. 1. I am a duck chef. 2. I personally think Qibao fanfics are more difficult to write. Beng 3 is the first second game I have played, and there is no doubt about Kiana's gold content. She is a character that will make you like her more and more (I like YaYa mainly because of Big YaYa, and I didn't feel anything like it when I first played the game) Qibao is really on Bai Yueguang's level. The author must write well! ! !

The overall evaluation is high, and the emotional line is very clear Male protagonist: From having a bad impression at the beginning, to feeling that the female protagonist is like an old friend, then to liking the heroine a little bit, and finally finding out that I like the heroine Female protagonist: At first, because the male protagonist was an observer, she wanted to please him and she became curious about the male protagonist's social fears and mental problems, so she had more contact with him. Later, the male protagonist gave several gifts and surprises, which made the female protagonist feel that the male protagonist is very good, and her good feelings sprouted. Finally, it sprouted and grew in daily life, and she realized that she likes him. But there are a lot of deletions. I know this is not what the author wanted, but it does affect the perception. Almost one-twentieth of the two hundred chapters are deletions. Sometimes the cause and effect are not clear, and it is really uncomfortable.

It suits my taste and the writing is very good. When will the relationship between the protagonist and Qibao unfold? The protagonist is not strong enough and his family status will not be high enough in the future. How about imitating Otto and gaining power from the tree?

This book is just like a daily novel. There is no clear main line but it is very interesting. Of course, because there are bound to be people who can't read everyday writing.

This book is very good, I support the author. As a loyal MiHoYo player, Reading fandom every day is my greatest pleasure. Don't stop updating, author! ! ! ! !

It is currently the book that I have been following for the longest time. I have been following it since before Ying Jie was summoned. I can only say that it is very good and fits the character of Mao Mao Chong very well (by the way, does the author single out Xi'er or Mao Mao Chong?), And the sweetness and knife are just right. Every step is to warm up the feelings and Luo Chu's character. I also like the social fear at the beginning, to only talking to Maomao (and Ai Yin) in the middle, and to the bad but very doting interaction with Maomao and Worm after the confession at the end. It gave me a feeling of cultivation. The whole story is cleverly conceived, natural, and the plot has high coherence. Even if I haven't watched it for a few days, I won't feel unfamiliar. (Beginning to get sick) Cat! I sing your praises! I praise you! Your smile, Your golden words, These are my everlasting beliefs! You are like the sun to the moon, You are like the sky to the clouds, so beautiful, So wonderful! Every moment of mine, It has meaning because of you, I want to ask about the appearance of "pure beauty" Idrila, I'm afraid it's not even one ten thousandth as good as yours! I support you! My beauty! You are like the most beautiful flower, Delicate and beautiful, And the meaning of my existence, I will fight for you until the last moment! Until then, I will also personally confirm your meaning, "Kiana"

Sweet, so damn sweet! ! ! Come on, come on, when will they officially start? It seems that I will take a knife in the later stage... I don't care if you cut it or not, there must be enough sugar! ! !

It's absolutely flawless. If I have to say it, it might make people a little uncomfortable when they meet in the early stage, but this is also the content that must be described in order to shape the character of the protagonist. When the relationship between the two parties eases a little bit, it disappears [Adoration] You grow 0.5 Minutes a day, kid, you have to be invincible (scratching your head)

The book is very interesting, and Qi Bao's character is really good. As for the plot, I think it's more of a daily routine at the moment. I may be waiting for the plot of Part 32 later... This is also a place where backstabbing can happen in real time [laughter] [laughter]

It's so sweet! ! ! The only four novels in the Honkai Impact series that I have read without swords! ! ! It's just that there were too many deleted scenes at the end, and the story of the siblings could have been continued. It's a pity, it's a masterpiece of Honkai Impact literature! ! ! However, there are still shortcomings. When writing about the Luo siblings, half of the writing was devoted to dealing with the powerful woman. As for the rest of the writing, only Luo Chu went to the teacher's office to occupy some of it. The rest were mostly memories and transitions, with fewer key examples. It would be better if there were more foreshadowings. There is nothing to say in the main text. It's too damn sweet! ! ! Teacher Luo V is still at C! ! ! Overall, the sugar content of this article exceeds the standard, it is rare for the Honkai Impact series to be knife-free, the author's writing style is OK, and the text is very good! Personal rating 9.8 Points! Extras and specials include the Luo family siblings, if the deleted scenes are still there... The writing is generally good, but some holes dug have not been filled, and Luo Chu can learn from Jian Ling and take Qi Maomao to travel to other worlds. It will be better to write more extras! Overall 9.7 Points! The above are mostly personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like them! Have you deleted some more? I remember that the number of words is not that small. It should be more than 500,000. Why do I come back and see that it is only 48-490,000?