The Ascetic God of War Reads Her Mind, and the Commandery Princess Is Flirted With Every Day

Very nice and interesting

Demining: 1. The character of the male protagonist's sister is [ancient love-brained female protagonist in a bloody sadistic novel]. Her character will not change in the main text (but there won't be many plots about her later). 2. The male protagonist will not disregard his sister's life and death from the beginning, but he will not indulge without a bottom line. There must be a transition.

It's okay, the story is quite complete, the loopholes are basically closed, there are no obvious bugs, the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists is a bit sweet, and it is worthy of praise that the male and female protagonists of the sweet pet novel do not have a childish giant baby, which is very satisfying.

The writing is actually pretty good, but for me, it's too short [laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry]. I could read this short story in one day! I read that the author's other book is also a short story with a systematic style, and the style is similar. After reading this one, I have no desire to read the other one. It is a sweet story, but it feels a little greasy in some places 😂! In fact, if you have experience, you can try to lengthen and enrich the plot lines.

It's good to watch. Although it's short, the plot is compact and the plot is very attractive. I love it. 💕💕💕💕💕[Learned][Learned][Learned]

It's quite good-looking, the heroine is very strong 👍 She's sassy and domineering, not bad, not bad, haha, the extras are also good, haha, good-looking

It would be funny if the male protagonist faced his sister and the female protagonist again to choose one... The emotional drama between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is strange...

Although the author avoids the hero's love-minded sister in the introduction, and she doesn't appear much, but when she appears, she is disgusting and causing trouble, so I still hate it to death. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is good, the female protagonist is not a virgin, and the golden finger she asked for from the system is also good. In the end, the prince was fucked stupid by the male protagonist's sister with a vase. King Yun ascended the throne, the male protagonist made the prince a marquis, the female protagonist made the princess a princess, and the male protagonist's sister locked up the stupid prince. Hahaha, things are turning in turn.

The pace is fast and very satisfying

Beautiful and worth watching.