The Coffin-Bearing Boy

The world view is relatively complete and interesting, and the plot develops fairly smoothly. It gives me the feeling that this book has an outline, but not enough details. The transition of events and the expansion of the map are a bit stiff, just like the part about going to school. There are also a lot of foreshadowings. I hope you don't forget to fill in the holes. Also when the sister's coffin was at the captain's place, the protagonist was not anxious enough, but the readers were more anxious. The writing is very good, and the events are described in more detail. For now, the author has written this book much better than the previous one. I hope the author can clarify who the heroine is. I hope it is a sister [shy] [shy], a sister-brother relationship is the best [shy] [shy] (personal opinion, for reference only), what I wrote in Tomato is considered very good, and the author, please give it a try (hope to get a reply [laughs])

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It's good to read. Although this book doesn't seem to have a very high rating, it surprisingly suits my taste. Whether it's the dark elements, the endless plots, or the character of the protagonist, I quite like it. First, let's look at the dark apocalyptic style. In the early stage, the protagonist hides a smile under a knife in the city of sin, but when he comes to the human realm, he hides a knife under a smile. Uh-huh, when will there be a big sword? Let's look at the protagonist himself. He actually started playing when he was 12 years old. Well, the protagonist's character is cute and cool. I like it. I just don't know if I will grow up in the future (I mean will I write about it in a few years)? Well, come on, author, I've read 90 chapters in one day (after all, I only have a limited amount of time to read in one day) Well, I've finished reading it, and sure enough, it's still not enough. Looking at the current second volume, the protagonist is indeed slowly growing and making progress, both in age and in mind. Especially when I read chapters 208 and 209, it really made me happy. I couldn't help but raise the corners of my mouth while reading it. Finally... (No spoilers) All in all, as long as this book is updated frequently and the speed can be improved, it is inevitable that it will become popular. I will just make a bold guess (the prophecy will come back to kill me successfully). The maximum number of chapters should be more than 300 and no more than 400. No more. My sister should have some consciousness even if she is not completely resurrected, and the relationship between Ye'an and Xiaofeng should also become more familiar [shy]

I think it's really good-looking. The character creation and world view are all listed in Urban Literature. However, the rating is relatively low and fewer people are watching it. What attracts me the most is the setting of the protagonist. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

I think this book is very good. The number of words is too small. It is a book about supernatural powers that can be compared with the God of Destruction. Come on.

It looks good, I just hope that if the 007 team leaves later, they won't leave so early... At least they will leave due to external changes... Otherwise, I will feel sad I like this book very much. It is very detailed in comparison. What I originally like is that many situations in the narrative are brief. I hate the kind of books where the next dungeon is stinky and long, and a lot of messy settings are revealed at once. This is the kind of long text. This book is much more comfortable to read, but what I feel is a little lacking is precisely at this point, because many emotional experiences need to be described carefully. Returning to the city of sin to kill Tie Qisang, Lu Niannian changes (this change is too fast, and it should not be done overnight ) and the sacrifices of Xiao and Zhao at the end of the first volume, these are the climax of the dramatic conflict, but the narrative is written very simply, without distinguishing it from other simple events, giving people a very bland feeling. If the brief and thrilling battle situation is realistic, it should be based on the mysterious method, especially the sacrifice, and reflect the character's psychology in details afterwards. I think it is better, or simply describe the character's psychology. Just writing this way feels a bit detailed and inappropriate (personal opinion, you can learn from it, and you can also criticize it)

The writing is quite good, but the single chapter is a bit short. I am curious if the Aniu and the mouse in front of the coffin can be upgraded or replaced?

Only 20,000 people have read this book?

As I read it now, it's my favorite genre, and the protagonist's character is in line with my expectations, so it's okay. Especially the transition from Sin City to normal life, the sense of immersion is really strong and really good. Everything is good, but the protagonist is really too weak. When the crisis encountered big changes in the early stage, he couldn't stand up and play the role of turning things around, sacrificing a lot of supporting characters with full and impressive descriptions. The key is that in the later stage, the protagonist's combat power is still not up to the top level. He is the one who has been playing assists in the team, and there is nothing to turn the tide in the team battle. What's outrageous is that, unlike other cool novels, the protagonist's talent and potential have been recognized by the strong men in the first echelon since he was young, and there is no old-fashioned show-off plot. [Cover face][cover face][cover face] Overall, the writing is very good, with the feeling of a group portrait, but the protagonist is obviously not happy enough. The label "not invincible" almost runs through the entire article, alas.

The subject matter is to my liking, and the characters are well created. The dark-style growth protagonist meets good people in a bad world. I'm a big fan of brother-sister relationships, and I'm also a fan of having a single female lead. Trying to stick to everything will only make me nutritionally balanced [laughing evilly] So far, the worldview has been designed well. The elusive villain under the eye shadow has hidden secrets, making people full of expectations. Finally, the twin male and female protagonists are really cool, don't you think? [Praise]