Return to Zero: Dreams in a Sea of Clouds, Spirits in the Mountains and Seas

Hello everyone, I am the author of When the Rain Falls. This book is a group portrait drama about an imaginary world and an imaginary universe. My style of group portrait writing is that everyone plays the protagonist and everyone plays the supporting role. This is also my first time writing a book, my first book as a writer. I understand that I still have many shortcomings and shortcomings, so I hope that Baozi passing by and fans who have read or liked it can leave your comments and opinions so that we can make progress together. I will also work hard to create a perfect story, and at the same time I will ensure at least two updates of 4,000 words a day, guaranteed to be updated 365 days a year. Because not many people read it now. If the number of readers increases in the future, I will update it because I have a lot of manuscripts on hand. If you like Baozi, you can rest assured to watch it, at least it won't be interrupted or unfinished. I will work hard to write it down before the finale!

Come, the author, read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night. .

Come, the author, read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night. .

First of all, the author: the writing style is still a little green, but it is not bad. Most of the time it is average, and occasionally the description can reach the middle or upper level in my mind. However, the author seems to have saved an entire book, which is a plus. At least it is basically impossible to interrupt. (Before this book is finished) The "aspirations" set by the grassroots in the article are quite good. But "resentment", uh, that's the name, wrong, just take it as it is (dog head). According to the setting, the intensity of "resentment" at the same level is much stronger than "ideal", so I'm thinking about one thing, whether "resentment" itself is "ideal" and sticking to the wish, and if the thought is different, it will become "resentment" and vice versa. (Purely guessing, if there is an explanation later, no... I will delete this paragraph.) About 30 chapters into the article, when the main point of view changed, I recalled that the author wanted to write a group portrait story. However, Yumu herself did not have many stories to tell anymore, and her settings were also very clear. Qingyu had to see if the author had any stories to tell later. If he wanted to tell them, they would probably be on the battlefield. And there's Qingyu's behavior during the time when Yu Mu came home. Well, how should I put it? Originally, Wen Qingyu has always given me a very reliable feeling, but this whole thing, even if I think about it carefully, is very reasonable. After all, no matter how reliable it is, it is not surprising for a girl of fifteen or sixteen years old to have this situation, but it still gave me a little tearing feeling (purely personal feeling) There is always a sense of instant vision when looking at the settings. Author, can you tell us about your source of inspiration? (Can be ignored) I originally planned to read these first and then write a review, but I don't have much time recently, so I just wrote a little bit based on what I have seen so far. I may change it later. I don't have time, so I will withdraw it first, (dog head) As for this book, I actually recommend starting to read it from the second volume. Many of its contents do not affect the viewing experience. Starting from the second volume, the only thing you need to know is [Wish], [Walful Resentment] and some basic definitions of "Wish of Royal Power" and "Noble Phantasm" As for why it is not recommended to start reading from the first volume? There are a few main reasons. The first reason is that the author's writing style was a little bit... Uncomfortable at first. It's better to describe it as green. The second is the perspective change and plot connection in the first volume, which is indeed a bit uncomfortable. The third is the first volume. Many things are mainly about the world view and settings. @ The various worldview settings in the first volume are really too scattered. I suggest you just write one and give some basic explanations, such as [wishes] and [wandering resentments] and what is the specific worldview? It doesn't need to be detailed, but it must be there. Do you know how devastated I was when I pieced together my world view piece by piece? [Anger] Sometimes you have to look back at what's ahead Okay, let's move on to the fourth point. In the first volume, the viewing angles switch more frequently, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. In the second volume, the viewing angles are relatively fixed (PS is only relatively fixed, but not fixed) Okay, here are some personal suggestions What I suggest is that the author make a table, or list which chapters are based on which characters as the main perspective and the stories that these chapters are about to write. For example, some inserted events, such as some events from pre-civilization, are marked. They do not affect the current plot. All they can do is to enrich the characters or the world view. However, sometimes the insertion will still affect the reading experience. Also, some of the epaulettes are inserted here, and then the main perspective is continued and another one is inserted every two days to continue the story. Your behavior will greatly affect the reading experience, although I am not just following the reading (hehe) Finally, I wish all those who persist in their dreams can achieve success!

The content is quite good. The setting is based on Sanbengzi. The writing is really good.

Tomato is one of the few authors who keeps updating even if he doesn't have many readers.

The author's writing style is improving all the time. It's a pretty good book. If you're not a cool writer or you can't take it as a pastime but you have the patience to read it, it's still a good book. I didn't read it for long and I probably skipped it. I've been busy taking exams recently, but I'll give the author a grade first to support it. Never mind. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

The writing is very good, but I hardly have time to read it because I am at work [crying]. If there are any shortcomings in the future, I will make up for it.

Come on, my dear, you are the one who persists the longest among newcomers writing books that I have seen. I give you five stars. Although I haven't read much yet, I still look forward to the future plots.

New readers must first praise the author for his continuous updates, and secondly, like the author's writing style and rich imagination.