Dragon Ball: I, GT Goku, Reborn in the Super Timeline

It looks good, at least it's not too outrageous so far. It's acceptable if the fan nerfs Angel God of Destruction, but if something happens later and he's duel with the king, this rating might change. The character's personality is also 70 to 80 percent, so it's pretty good so far.

The writing is pretty good. Beerus is like a patch in Super. Every time the version is enhanced, he becomes stronger. The author designed his limit in advance. It is very good. Goku beats Beerus. It is really cool. I hope the plot will be exciting after beating Black Goku. I remember that there was an all-king in that world. I remember that the God of Destruction was dead and the angels were sleeping. We can try to revive the Saiyan planet in the parallel world.

Wow, he's so damn good-looking. I really like Son Goku. Don't let Vegeta keep up with Goku. He just imitates Goku in everything. I feel a little uncomfortable. Haha, the author is great, come on, update It's so pretty, but it's not enough

So far it seems to be okay, at least it's not broken. The specific personality charm of Wukong is pretty well written, but in terms of combat power, there is no need to pursue it so much. For the following words, I hope it will be more interesting. As I write the same novel and are both authors of Dragon Ball, I really hope it won't suddenly stop updating. The improvement is too fast. Mainly, I always feel that this is worse than some systems. Also, I feel that the improvement is a bit too much. At most, if Super Four and Super Blue are added together, I can still be convinced. Of course, I can just add Super Five and myself. This frequency of improvement is a bit too fast, right? The combat power is very easy to collapse in the later stage. If the improvement is not very fast and it is only upgraded to super blue, I think I can understand it. What's more, don't you think Gogeta's potential is not as good as Goku's? Isn't that a bit ridiculous? Moreover, the Gogeta in this novel was when Goku and Super Goku reached the fusion, and then merged with Vegeta. So are you overwriting it?

Although the combat power increased too quickly, it was not bad, and it satisfied my desire to watch the battle between Gogeta and Beerus [I learned it]

The author writes very well. There are many very novel feelings

The writing is very good, it makes me feel like I used to follow Dragon Ball anime, especially the battle descriptions, which are the best among Dragon Ball fans.

The plot is compact and I haven't watched it so passionately for a long time. Keep up the good work.

Wow wow wow, I feel like I can't write a long review right now. I can only say that it's been a long time since I've seen something similar to the original work that fits the character's personality. Come on, author! Leave a good review first And don't give up, okay? By the way, the author, where do you plan to finish?

After reading it for several months, in summary, this book is simply the ceiling of Tomato Dragon Ball fan fiction. It is the only true god among Tomato Dragon Ball fan fiction. The characters and personalities are in line with the original work, and there are new ideas from the author. It perfectly meets the requirements of Dragon Ball fans for fan fiction. It can be called the best Dragon Ball fan fiction.