The Sweet Young Wife Who Transmigrated from Ancient Times

Brother, please give me another chapter. I am dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. Give me another chapter, just one chapter. Please, I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore.

The subject matter is quite novel, and my eyes lit up. This is the first time I have seen this kind of time travel. When I first started writing Sugar Cube, my expressions were a bit green. After Chapter 30, I got into the groove. The writing is really good, and it can be considered a masterpiece.

It is a slow-burning sweet novel with multiple female protagonists. If you like reading sweet novels, those who are not slanderous may like it. The author writes very delicately about emotions. But! Those who like to watch scheming, fast-moving, decisive male protagonists, or those who like to see forces develop and conquer the world may not be able to accept it. I hope that friends who like to read this type of novel can avoid my comments by themselves and do not give negative reviews. Leave some way out for those of us who like to read short sweet stories. After all, there are very few short sweet stories with multiple female protagonists, and even fewer good ones. Moreover, the author's random double penetration setting is very new. I have never seen this subject before. Assistant author, please give me some more pictures of Chi Chi. Please!

The way this book is written is much more novel than the previous time travel. The back and forth time travel adds to the interest of the story. Although the author's writing style is indeed average, it is generally good. I won't say too much, so I will read it slowly because I think this type is more in line with my appetite (that is, the male protagonist has to eat too slowly)

First, it's a sweet story, secondly, it's a sweet story about ancient times, and finally, it's a sweet story about the harem. It's so interesting and I love to read it. The author's writing is online. I just hope it can be updated vigorously.

It's a very good start. The counter-routine is to first have the heroine travel through time, and then the two of them travel back. It's not bad. I can't say how good the writing is, but it's okay. Maybe it's because I just prefer to read this kind of sweet pet novel. I think it's pretty good.

Personally, I don't like it very much. You can say I hate it. I won't read it if it has multiple female protagonists. However, this book with multiple female protagonists has a tightly integrated plot and is not obtrusive. The connection between the female protagonists is smooth. It can be regarded as a good multi-female novel for me.

After seeing this, I feel that the plot is more daily-oriented and not too poisonous. However, judging from these foreshadowings, grandma's house is probably the old location, and the ending is most likely to be. If you want to see the ending, you must be prepared.

I think it's okay. It's a good thing that the two times are not synchronized with each other, otherwise there will be a lot of trouble, and then the original body can't do human things. The heroines are all perfect bodies, although under normal circumstances, according to their original experiences, even if the original body is not good, it is difficult to be perfect, but The problem is not big, Wan Bi looks much more comfortable, and then there is the plot, which is relatively dull, but there should be ups and downs later. After all, Liu Yan is involved, there will definitely be trouble later, and there is also the protagonist's grandfather, who should be found in ancient times.

I feel that the author is a newcomer and is not very mature in handling various aspects, such as the slow pace of the opening chapter, the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and the writing style. However, there is still a lot of room for improvement as I write slowly in the future, and there is still potential. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]