One Piece: The Straw Hat Pirates' Fairy Queen

The author's writing is good, and the plot that needs to be changed can be rounded off, so update it quickly. None of the donkeys in the production team are so slow. [Smile]

Holy shit, I haven't seen a sex-changing pirate article in a long time. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

One Piece and Funaru, a journey to another world, it turns out that a boy transforms into a girl. I didn't understand the main character's power system after reading the introduction, but then I gradually understood it. I wrote some plots that are different from the original work, and there are innovative plots, which are very good! 1. The heroine is strong, brave, smart and humorous. She protects her companions but does not interfere with the growth of other crew members and helps her companions. She has an online IQ, learns things quickly, and quietly improves herself when needed. She is a gentle and strong person. 2. The setting of the power system is very good, which strengthens the strength according to the battle. 3. The writing is solid and the battles are described in detail and vividly, making people excited and showing a sense of power. The writing is also funny and has a strong sense of empathy. I feel that it is not a loss to invest in it.

It's pretty good. I hope I can recreate some of Fairy Tail Queen's famous scenes.

Come on, author, there are scenes of laughter and laughter as well as scenes of passionate battles. I hope the author can grasp the battle strength and not collapse. Finally, I suggest you find some pictures of Erza's various armors and put them in the article. Readers can also better understand Erza's various armors. In daily life or some other scenes, you can dress up in bunny girl, frog costumes, etc. Erza can also be very funny and cute sometimes.

It's better than I expected. The battle descriptions are barely passable. I think the daily descriptions are quite good. The original characters' personalities are well-accomplished, and the plot is not completely consistent with the original work. I really like the proper before and after changes. The interaction between the protagonist and other people can feel like One Piece, with a funny atmosphere. The author carefully integrated the protagonist into the story without feeling separated. Another point is that there are no emotional scenes, which I quite like. For me, One Piece is more exciting because of the bond between partners.

Now it seems that the writing is good, and it seems to be relatively comfortable at the moment. I hope it can remain so in the future.

Good book, can be too short.

The subject matter is very novel, the author's writing style is also good, and the story is normal, but there are some shortcomings in the atmosphere of the story. For example, in anime, when you first meet Aaron, you feel overwhelming. Today's viewers look at Aaron in the past and think that's all. But at that time, the animation used the screen display and the tension of the residents to reflect Aaron's sense of oppression. But novels cannot use pictures, they can only be reflected in the foreshadowing of language and the description of the environment. Some novels are called masterpieces because the author uses words to bring the audience into it. Many authors of Tomato are not willing to refine their writing skills and story descriptions. They simply talk about it and pay attention to the fact that one sentence can be general and the audience will lose their mind. I really like Erza and this theme, and I hope the author can work harder.

The subject matter is good, the writing is fluent, and the characters of the protagonists are quite restored. Although the previous plot has been changed, it is still very imaginative. The plot also made up for some regrets, Sabo Esti recognized each other in advance. Some characters in the plot have been strengthened. The protagonist group learned domineering in the early stage, Lao Sha learned the weapon color, and I don't know if Fan Oka has been strengthened. The author seems to have deliberately highlighted the protagonist. For example, in the Sky Island chapter, in Chapter 28, Chopper accidentally fainted during the rising sea current. Robin could obviously use his abilities to catch Chopper, but he had to confront Blackbeard to save the protagonist. All in all, this book is still very good, but some places look strange.