The Outcast: Divine Spirit and a Ghostly Physique Make Me Invincible

First of all, let me state that the author's writing is acceptable. I'm just offering a suggestion: to be honest, in my personal opinion, the author could replace that Fanma bloodline with the Chiyou bloodline or the Wu clan bloodline, or at the very least, add some demon clan combat techniques.

Keep it up! ✊ Don't abandon the project prematurely, and don't leave it unfinished.

Incredibly good! A young man embarks on an invincible path to revenge, investigating everything, but still no one knows who's behind it all. He's even hunted down by the entire world of supernatural beings, ends up abroad, and then it just ends in a blur. Tell me, how invincible is that?

It's good, I've been watching it, it's my type 🤔

It looks good. It's okay to go a little slower; just maintain the quality and don't break. Keep it up!

The pig thinks it's really, really great. It's so incredibly saintly.

The writing is good, and the logic is clear. Looking forward to the story after they become powerful.

I think it looks great.

It looks pretty good, but the system becomes almost invisible later on.

Wow, this is so well-written! This... I absolutely have to give it five stars. It's been so long since I've left a review.