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First! This looks like a science fiction novel that even Liu Cixin couldn't write!! I said in the first twelve chapters that you wrote about a superpowered girl classmate who wouldn't live long, and sure enough, I was right.

I read all 49 chapters in one go, no problems. My mouth was crooked the whole time, I couldn't get enough. It's so damn sweet, it's sickeningly sweet. The female lead is practically every man's first love and perfect wife and mother, a typical rich heiress who lost her parents early. This isn't just being a kept man, this is like a nine-turn golden elixir, she's ascending to heaven on the spot.

The romance scenes are as well-done as ever, but I have a small suggestion. Currently, the main plot seems to revolve around collecting items to save the female lead? This doesn't really make much sense with your title, "One item per day." Just my personal opinion, please don't criticize. 🤦

It's pretty good. The previous book was also great, but I'm not updating it now that I'm getting into this genre 😠

At first, I thought it was a lighthearted, fun story about daily check-ins, but then the introduction of the Time and Space Administration made sense. The story should then revolve around fighting against the Administration. I'm hooked! Hope the author keeps up the good work! I read it all in one go and it wasn't enough! (Please, no angst later on! 🙂🙂🙂)

After reading twenty chapters, I wondered why good novels always only have sixty chapters left. So I could only read slowly and carefully, hoping this "exam-taking" journey wouldn't end so quickly. But my worst fears came true. Around chapter forty, the Time Administration and the Sacred Timeline appeared—a useful but difficult-to-write setting.

It's not bad, but it involves the concept of a timeline, which is difficult to reconcile and explain. Doraemon has this concept because it's an animated series, so there's no need to overthink it; plot holes are created but not filled. Author, you'd better have a bolder imagination. Check out Rick and Morty's wild imaginations!

Great, the author writes very sweet stories, it's just a pity about the previous one.

It looks pretty good so far, but this kind of setting could easily go wrong if not handled carefully. I hope the author keeps it up.

This book won't end up in the palace, will it? [What?]