The Lie-Flat Young Master's Journey to Becoming a Sword Immortal

In Chapters 42 and 43, the protagonist actually didn't want to get his hands dirty and asked his servants to bury the enemy alive in a distant place. Then the enemy was rescued by a passing master, and he was able to let the tiger go home. It's extremely poisonous. The main character's parents are all helpless people, and several nursing homes are also in bad shape. Are they afraid that they will be wiped out at any time?

It's really a bit poisonous. Why didn't you commit suicide yourself and get away with it [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] I could have endured the poison for a while, but stopped at 216 and started a harem. Liu Ruyan's character design was not good at the beginning, and she was whitewashed. Who will read a harem stud story now [laughs awkwardly], the protagonist is still awesome, no wonder the score is so low, she slipped away [vomit]

Five-star praise, I've only read about 40 chapters, this is a poisonous point, it's great, whoever reads it will know [vomit]

Let's summarize what everyone thinks are the poisonous points in the book review. The first is the killing and being rescued by an expert. The author did not lay the groundwork for this part, and later suddenly explained that it is the correction of the world's will. If the author adds a few more minor events to correct the world's will, it may seem smoother, otherwise it will feel too forced and involved. The second is the exchange of exercises. Many people think that the exercise of pig's feet should be unique. This is not a cool and invincible article. , And don't forget that this is just a Qi training technique. After cultivating to the highest level, it is only the 9th level of Qi training, which is also the first level of sainthood. There may be a foundation-building elixir later. This is what I have seen in the book review. I personally think that there is another aspect, that is, the protagonist's personality has changed drastically. There is no more foreshadowing in this part. After all, it is a soul that has passed through. There must be many differences from the original person. The author writes relatively slowly, and the writing style is relatively smooth [Cool]

Finally, I have another one with good attributes and good writing that I like.

The reason for giving five stars is to let more people see it. One of the poisonous points is why Zhou Li suddenly got together with the protagonist. This was too fast, and the emotional line was completed overnight. Not much to say, if you want to know, watch it yourself

Skipping the opening chapters, the plot is pretty smooth! The protagonist's soul is in the body of his predecessor who was killed by a trick, and accidentally awakens the golden finger to upgrade... The protagonist's upgrade is relatively balanced in the early stage, followed by a period of stagnation, and then Qi Yu suddenly upgrades several levels...

Deduction of one star: Unfortunately, there was no response from the host, so they had to dissipate. Another star was deducted. Xu Ling opened his mouth and took the elixir, only to find that every bit of this supposedly valuable healing elixir was absorbed by the system and had no effect on his body at all. And what's even worse is that maybe the targeted effect is different, and its medicinal effect cannot even convert a single attribute point. Zaidu: It's so funny, drag, drag, drag, damn, he was rescued, it's really bullshit, Another deduction: What kind of awesome person is the Demon-Suppressing Division???, Chunchun 2b, why are you acting like an idiot?

It's really not bad. Although it is said to be a completed book, the layout set by the author actually allows for a lot more to be written. The whole book is exciting and not too slow. Basically, the protagonist is invincible. However, the origin of the system at the end is not explained, nor is the way home (Blue Star). There may be a higher-dimensional world. Although these are not very important, it can be regarded as a regret of mine. There are many things that are not fully explained, some pitfalls (people or things), and branch plots are not fully explained, but it is understandable, and it is mainly written around the protagonist. But I really think it is very good. It has a happy ending. The subject matter is very good. Throughout the whole text, the protagonist is basically invincible. It is a good and refreshing article. I recommend reading it to friends who are short of books.

The plot is compact, but there are a few logical illogicalities that force the plot. For example, instead of killing Xu, Master Wang and his apprentice dumped the body so that Wang could be rescued. However, this novel can be considered a masterpiece, and it is supported by five stars. Come on update