Starting My Supernatural Journey in Another World

The author is of high quality. But it's a pity that it's double wear. Sometimes I can't keep up with the pace. Must be writing two stories at the same time Start by robbing people from the underworld. It just feels outrageous. Why is the underworld so powerful that it can fight against the country? [Laughing] I feel like my IQ has been rubbed on the ground by the author [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly]

Generally speaking, it's not bad, but there are too many female characters with many roles, and they are all single. Even if they are married, their husbands must die (the protagonist's mother, the female husband) In my mind, there are many female characters: the protagonist's mother, the protagonist's sister, the protagonist's little girl, the female reporter, the little female thief picked up from another world, the senior sister, and the female wife. In my mind, there are many male characters: the protagonist destroys his friend and best friend, and the senior sister's brother catches the head. Taoist priest (counted as half, he gave the protagonist some opportunities when he first appeared and then disappeared)

The content of the novel is very interesting. In the early stage, the protagonist's strength will not be overwhelming or invincible in cities and other worlds. The urban plot and the alien plot are well balanced. There won't be a situation where you go to another world and don't return to the city for a long time.

Among the products in this category that I have seen, it ranks among the top ten. I hope you won't stop updating.

A great book about traveling between two worlds, written by both sides, so good! It's much better looking than those stories about traveling between two worlds and writing about different worlds all the time, and it can be written on both sides. After all, it's the first time I've seen such a good story, and some flaws aren't that important! Come on, I hope there will be more updates, and I hope I won't make the mistake of losing my combat power!

It's well written, the author is very interesting, and the two worlds are well balanced.

It looks so good, so itchy. Give it to me quickly. Give me a few more chapters.

Advantages: The writing is top notch on this platform, the plot is relatively stable but not mediocre, and gradually gets better in the later stages. The world view design is logical, loopholes are hard to find, the handling of events is clear and in-depth, and the cognition and thoughts output are definitely excellent in novels. The shortcoming is that the author is obviously a liberal arts major and lacks understanding of engineering. Moreover, there is a lack of imagination. The worldview design is too consistent with our logic and has no whimsy at all. As a novel, wouldn't it be very unoriginal if it is not neat at all? In summary, it is a very serious novel with excellent writing, rigorous logic, and no fuss. Many comments in the comments say that they can't move when they see a woman. In fact, this book doesn't even have a heroine. She may have had an idea in the early stage, but later she became a supporting character.

Announcement I'm sorry, readers, but I can no longer finish this book. After all, this is just an experimental novel, and my purpose of writing it was just to test my own ability to grasp a story with a huge world view (it turns out that I am still too green). I know that this is very irresponsible to the readers who support me. After all, since everyone is willing to read my novels, it means that everyone still recognizes my writing ability. Here I would like to solemnly say to those readers who have collected this novel: I'm sorry! You have been lied to, I am not the author.

I have read Chapter 47, and I currently deserve this rating.