It Began With Childhood Sweethearts and Ends in True Love

Now that I see it, I think the first part is pretty good, but the second part feels a little strange. For example, in Chapter 41, "While eating, the man would give the girl her favorite dishes from time to time. If the girl didn't eat the dishes, he would put them back into his bowl and eat them. Such an excellent man is willing to eat the remaining dishes in her bowl that she doesn't like, which is enough to show that he values the girl." I think this paragraph should be changed to "While eating, Gu Jinlan would give the girl her favorite dishes from time to time, and Li Chuyi wouldn't eat them." He would put the food back into his own bowl and eat it. For such an excellent man to be willing to eat the remaining dishes in her bowl is enough to show that he values girls. "It might be better to change the names of men and girls in some parts of the article to the names of the male and female protagonists, otherwise it will be a bit confusing when looking at it. Of course, this is just my personal opinion and suggestion. [Shy][shy][shy]