Ye Luoli: Time Must Not Be Trespassed Upon

Fortunately, okay, the male protagonist is not the water prince. I hope it can be free of CP, Shi hope is beautiful alone, which is great.

This article is truly outstanding, every word shines with wisdom and light. Especially the protagonist's character, the elegance and generosity mentioned are just right, full of charm and attraction, which made me fall in love with him. First of all, I have to give you high praise for your writing skills. The article's theme is clear, the plot is compact, and the language is fluent, giving readers a pleasant reading experience. More importantly, you succeeded in shaping your protagonist's personality and making her appear elegant and graceful. This image of confidence, strength and wisdom deeply captures the reader's attention and makes it unforgettable. Secondly, the detail processing of the article is also very good. You successfully brought out the characters' emotions and psychological activities to the fullest, making the readers more engaged in the story. At the same time, you also cleverly use the environment and atmosphere to create the atmosphere of the story, which enhances the appeal of the entire story. Overall, this article is excellent and demonstrates your excellent writing skills. I believe that as long as you continue to maintain this innovative and professional attitude, you will definitely achieve greater success in your writing. However, I think further improvements may be needed in the following areas: On the one hand, while you successfully create an elegant image of your protagonist, you can delve deeper into her elegant appearance and inner conflicts to enhance the complexity and depth of the character. On the other hand, in terms of plot design, you can consider adding some suspense and dramatic elements to better attract the reader's attention and emotional investment. Finally, it is recommended that you continue to maintain an attitude of excellence in your future writing and continuously improve your writing skills and creative level.

How come no one reads such a beautiful book? Come on, update more, it will definitely become popular

What a beautiful book, why doesn't anyone read it? If you add more fuel, it will surely catch fire.

Although there is some oocc, but in my personal opinion, everyone sees things differently, which is normal. Da Da wrote it very well, and wrote Shi Xi very grandly. If you feel emotions, the master of time, the god of time, it would be very strange if there was a fixed cp. Time is fair and will not stop for a certain person... Personal thoughts [laughing and crying]

I came here this time considering that Toki doesn't have his own mount yet, which is a holy beast, and I want to submit it to the author. Of course, it doesn't matter whether he adopts it or not. Considering his identity, I recently read another novel, in which there are several dragons that are particularly suitable for Toki. The power of pressure and the power to control corpses. The second is the Void Reincarnation Dragon, which possesses the power of the void and reincarnation. The third is the Star and Sea Dragon, which possesses the power of the universe, stars and oceans. These three dragons also come from a novel by Tomato. It is called Being a Dragon Master. It is not too much to have more dragons. Some words may be biased. , But that's about it, I hope to extract some power from these three dragons, such as the power of time from the first dragon, the power of void and reincarnation from the second dragon, the power of stars from the third dragon, plus my own power of space, such as space, I kind of want to use these powers to create a path dedicated to Shi Xi His own dragon mythical beast, please note that it is a mythical beast, not a holy beast, the kind of upright mythical beast that becomes a god. If you want to know more about these three dragons, you can go to this book to have a look, just submit a contribution, please, hurry up and arrange a holy beast for my Shixi, it doesn't matter if you don't adopt it, hurry up and arrange one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Let's change it. The name of the novel I recommend is: I am a beast master, Long Duo. It's not too much, right?

The big book is really beautiful, I just really hope that CP is the king of the world [love]

Awesome, really beautiful, highly recommended

I think the god of time, CP Water Prince, is the author! ! !

Very nice. I like it very much.