Siheyuan: What Aunt Bai? She’s Just a Widow

To treat someone lightly and cautiously only leads to passive defense, empty talk, and a lack of decisiveness and strategy. What is rebirth? It's living life anew. All experiences are known and understood, good and bad are no longer distinguishable, one acts with a sense of urgency and avoids misfortune, seizing what should be seized. Am I right?

I don't know if it's a copy or a revised and re-uploaded version, but the plot is all too familiar.

The timeline is too messy. Since He Daqing was not in Baoding and was still in Beijing, even if he was renting a house elsewhere, it's impossible that he wouldn't go back to visit. So why does it feel like He Daqing wasn't even in Beijing at all later on?

This person knows nothing and just writes nonsense. Qin Huairu hasn't even started working at the factory yet, what's going on between her and a man? Trying to scam someone in a courtyard house, doesn't they even bother to check the plot? How can they have no respect for the original work? This is really shameful.

The timeline was off at first, but it was still okay. It got increasingly frustrating as it went on. Then it got reported, and they suspected the author of padding the story with extra chapters. They caught them, thankfully they were investigated for a week, and then another dozen or so chapters were added. It was so frustrating I wanted to vomit. Don't read it!

It's a mess, full of problems, the timeline is too chaotic. Qin Huairu's husband is still fine, she hasn't even inherited her job yet, but it's already written that she's seducing men at the steel mill, and He Daqing is just preparing to elope. How old is Sha Zhu at this time? Xu Damao, who is younger than him, has already gotten himself into trouble?

The story is pieced together. It starts with He Daqing planning to go to Baocheng, then suddenly jumps to the point where Xu Damao has been married for several years. Then, at the all-staff meeting, it suddenly involves bribing the factory to return goods—it's all completely nonsensical. And all this talk about being manipulated and having no choice is just ridiculous.

The story begins in 1954, with Sha Zhu reborn. If He Daqing is still alive, there's no point in continuing.

The later parts felt AI-generated. The narrative was barely readable, but the dialogue was inhuman, like two AIs playing chess. The programmatic nature was obvious. If I had to find a redeeming quality, it would be that the story seemed coherent, unlike some novels where the AI parts were completely unrelated to the preceding text.

It looks great, keep it up!