Starting with Goblin Slayer, I Only Know How to Sacrifice

Come on, author, the writing is very comfortable. If you can change the poisonous point about childhood sweethearts, it will be a good little white grain grass article [laughing] (make the girl invisible most of the time, everyone just comes to see the protagonist and me thinking)

I have tried very hard to copy it, but I didn't know how to copy the first chapter. I copied a little bit and then I didn't know how to get over it. The main thing is to get up. In fact, it's been a long time since I wrote a novel. I don't know what kind of novel I want to write. I can't just get up. I have worked very hard and got past 1 o'clock. It's not much. Anyway, I don't know if the author will see what I said. I probably won't see it.

Overall pretty good. Since there are so few people writing about Ge Sha, the biggest drawback in giving 5 stars is that Zhang Ling quickly strengthened his strength or marginalized her due to his thickness. It's best to just write it to death. Either change Zhang Ling or write him to death, otherwise this will become a poisonous point. Rather, it is already a poisonous point now.

It's a pity that the killing chapter ended too quickly. I also want to see more of daily life

Don't be a eunuch, brother

Except for one Zhao Ling who is a poisonous point, the others are fine.

Damn it, why did it suddenly stop showing up after a while after I posted it [face covering]

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The biggest poisonous point is the green plum This green plum is poisonous!

Let's talk about the advantages first: the language is rich and distinctive, the description angles are accurate and diverse, and it is good at using a lot of psychological descriptions and very clever plot points to depict three-dimensional and full characters. The plot is very good after being corrected by the readers. It allows the protagonist to have greater expressive power without deviating from the original plot. If there are no problems in the later period, I think it should be 9.5 Or above But there are also shortcomings: the structure is messy, there are occasional strange grammatical errors, and I don't know if it's due to typing or something else? Sometimes there will be situations that look extremely uncomfortable, such as ":" in front of a person's name, strange grammatical errors, and there are too many. It is recommended that the author find a post-processing agent to correct it for him or directly hand it over to the AI. In short, overall, the writing style is elegant, not vulgar and very interesting. It is worth reading.