Fellow Daoist! That Thief Has Written Another Book

I just thought this book was well written before, until I saw the scene in the mine and saw Mu Changying's words "I have seen her eyes." "So, I don't believe you." That sentence "I dare not take advantage of all my luck, for fear that I will have to pay it back someday." When I saw Ye Xiaozhou's sentence "No one tells my story," I suddenly liked this book. The charm of group portraits is not that the supporting characters have distinct personalities, but that each person in the group portrait is the protagonist in his or her own story.

After hearing this name, I clicked on it and discovered that it is full of talent, spirit, and laughter. Philosophy and emotion coexist, and it easily outlines the world and youthful spirit. There are many awakened keen women in the comments, and I enjoyed reading it from the beginning. But it feels very sharp, so I'll give it five stars first and then look back. I started to get confused halfway through, feeling like I didn't even know what I wanted to express. He even suddenly dedicated a whole chapter to express his one-sided views on "radical women" and used extreme personal speech to demonstrate the good and evil behavior of the entire group.

I stayed up late to read it. I really like Ji Yuezhang. She is gentle and tough, but despite her poor health, she never resents her and stands up for herself in times of crisis. I hope that after this, she will be in good health, have a clear path to immortality, and everything will go well.

This book is really good and highly recommended, but because it was inconsistent with the author's ideas in Chapter 283, I abandoned the article. I always believe that criticizing the pioneers who opened the way is a betrayal of our side. It's understandable that I felt uncomfortable after reading some of the remarks, and I feel the same way about abandoning the book now. But maybe one day, after I slowly forget about this discomfort, I can calm down and look at this point of view rationally and pick up this book again. I hope the author can one day look at this group rationally, correctly, and clearly.

Tomato is considered to be a high-quality article, not greasy, not clichéd, relaxed and freehand, but occasionally a bit lost, but too seedy.

The writing style is excellent, the subject matter is very novel and not cliché, the heroine is transparent and open-minded, the story is written around the cause and effect of reincarnation, and it is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Each character is very delicately portrayed, as if these stories are unfolding in front of my eyes, as if I am one of them, following the protagonist everywhere to experience everything in the world, great love

Different from conventional fairy tales about cultivating immortals, this one is not even that exciting. The heroine has been trapped in the word "mistaken" all her life. She has mistakenly entered another world, mistakenly entered the path of immortality, and mistakenly entered Nanli City. From then on, she started a life of doing everything by her own heart but being manipulated by others. She asked herself countless times whether it would be different if she did it again. , The answer is no, because she is such a person, smart but not extremely smart, selfish but not completely selfish, kind but not bottomless kindness, she is every ordinary person but trying hard to live and want to be a good person, she is a glimmer of hope in the world. Just move forward, always move forward, although you may feel guilty, you will have no regrets. I wish you a peaceful sleep without dreams, and a long happy life without invitations. Thinking back on Wu Invitation's life is like the song "Rolling in the Red Dust", it is easy to come and go, decades of traveling in the world, easy to be separated and difficult to reunite, the eternal sorrow of love and hate, meeting and saying goodbye and then meeting again, until the final farewell to her who has disappeared, leaving only various legends about her and other people in the rolling red dust.

I was very depressed after reading it. The author wanted to write about the two sides of human nature, which are neither black nor white, but when he wrote it, he felt that he couldn't wait, couldn't love, couldn't seek, and all living beings were pawns. I couldn't even cry at the end, it was too uncomfortable. I can't see the author's love for the protagonist, I only see the reflection of the author himself. I hope the author can love himself well. If the reversal is not clear enough, you can bury the pen, but it must be clear enough when you click it. Cultivation of immortality is not about mathematics, physics and chemistry. If you want to use theory to explain the way of heaven, please set it up and do not modify it. True* group portrait article. Several supporting characters gave me more emotional feedback than the protagonist. Especially Osmanthus Immortalis Ye Xiaozhou, these two people are rare people with a single label in the author's writing, but they write very well. Relatively speaking, Senior Sister Gu and Senior Brother Shen are relatively average. During Shen Zhong's long blank period, he was completely a tool man. Gu Yixin is a member of the sect, but he rarely plays any chess pieces, and he is an intellectual tool. If you want to write a story that is neither black nor white, you can't let the world revolve around the protagonist. In the end it felt a little out of whack. Besides! I can't understand why the protagonist can't change her ten or eight vests! Practice two more exercises! Like: The author tried his best to bury a lot of foreshadowing, some of which really require careful consideration and thinking, which is rare. It's a bit relaxing in the dark world, and the overall rhythm is pretty good. Wu Jing is still too much like a normal person. A little kind, a little smart, a little courageous. And I do like it.

Very good writing, very meaningful thoughts, profound and fascinating but not profound, and the steady logical lines are also very clear. The author is very good at burying hidden lines and writing foreshadowings. Everything is not black and white. From each standpoint, it is the best and most rational decision. Untimely justice may not actually bring about justice. The supporting characters are all made of flesh and blood and are not thin at all. Both the protagonists and the villains have a heart-wrenching side of love, hate, and a very good story. Senior Sister Gu always chooses the right path without leaving any trace, which is very suitable for taking power; Senior Brother Shen surprised me, from the initial good intentions to the later "rectification of chaos" to the last glimmer of life left, so his ending is also the best destination; Ye Xiaozhou is indeed a small boat outside of destiny, everything is done according to one's heart, killing one person has nothing to do with ten thousand people, and killing ten thousand people has nothing to do with that one person, so the final battle is even more unexpected but reasonable to me Among them, she only came without invitation; Zhang Daye has always practiced his way, the contrast between his appearance and his appearance is very different, but the portrayal is completely natural; I also like Senior Brother Song's natural evil, he is thorough He is a bad guy at the bottom but logical and self-consistent. He knows the subtleties. He is so smart. He is clearly bad and pretends to be bad at the same time. He is a pure and happy person. He is flexible and flexible, but he most wants to live but in the end he fails to live. I really like it. I would like to read a separate book. Including the initial three-person small group and the three-person small group after entering the sect, as well as other supporting characters that may be written a lot or mentioned a little bit, are all well-shaped, everyone is not weak, everyone has a way to come and a destination.

In Tomato Rare Thin Chaff, there is no golden finger, and there is no invincibility. Every character is distinct and three-dimensional. I think there are still some shortcomings in the writing style. Some places still look a bit stiff. I hope the author can write better and better [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]