One Piece: The Whitebeard Pirates Hear My Thoughts

The plot in it is really connected one after another, but I particularly like Marco's plot and the plot with Ace, which I kind of miss. There is also a place where Ace the cat squats. It's very cute when you think about it. It's really super pretty! ! !

The girl is very cute! Very immersive! And the emotions are handled very delicately! In the latest episode, the younger sister goes to rescue someone who was kidnapped by human traffickers. Some people comment on this, saying that she protects herself and puts herself first, but I think the younger sister is the protagonist, and one of the protagonist's characteristics is that she can do whatever she wants. Just like Ace, he knew that he might not be able to defeat Whitebeard, but he still went. How to say it? There are always some things that are more important than life, not to mention that she is the protagonist. My sister is a child in a peaceful era. For the darkness that is directly spread out in front of her, compassion is inevitable. She saw the suffering in front of her and chose to try to save it. I think she is great. The method may be a little inappropriate, but the idea is good. If my sister really lets it go, I think it will be OC. My sister's personality has always been gentle and cute but she never lacks courage.

Like it very much. Very detailed description

It's very interesting to watch. It's the first time you can watch the mind-reading flow. The psychological activities are logical and not verbose, and the emotional scenes are natural. I wonder if there will be an emotional scene between the Straw Hat Pirates and Sabo in the future TT

It's very interesting. How can I put it this way? It really fits my understanding of a normal girl who travels to the world of One Piece without a golden finger. The character of the heroine was well created. At the end, it felt like the heroine didn't really accept it but really had no choice. The plot was very well written. There were no pitfalls and all the pitfalls that needed to be filled were filled. It's just that the heroine is so well portrayed. When the abuse gets to the point, I really can't help but worry. What is the difference between this kind of time travel and a human trafficker? I feel like my acceptance of feelings is still a bit hasty? (Maybe there's really no other way to go) (Close eyes)

It's a very good article. The protagonist integrates very naturally. There is no cheat except being able to communicate freely and understand the text. The protagonist does things that every Haimi can do. Such an ordinary person is on this ship, and there is no sense of disobedience. The inner story of the protagonist is also well written, not as verbose as the same type of "listen to the heart" articles. None of the crew members of the Whitebeard Group are seriously OOC. The author's writing is very good, but it is too little to fatten up before reading. I recommend it.

This is the first One Piece fan novel I have read. It is very good. There is no system and it changes yourself a little. It is good. There are also extras besides the independent main text, which can satisfy CP fans. As a reader of the original plot, I was satisfied with Ace's emotional regret for his parents who loved him until his death, which was really good. When I watched the drama, I felt very sorry for him. It is clear that the child who is expected to be born by his parents is loved, but although he is cheerful, he always doubts his own existence. This is really good.

My family members listened to me and even Haimi read this book. This book is amazing. Not only are the characters real and there is no OOC, but the daily life is also warm and funny. In the end, when Ace meets his father, that part is interlocking and echoes back and forth. All the holes that need to be filled are filled in, forming a direct relationship. It's a closed loop. It's absolutely amazing. I really cried to death. This kind of novel should be above 9.0. Listen to me and read this book. It comes from a strong recommendation from a ten-year-old Haimi. I guarantee that you will regret it for the rest of your life if you don't read it. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned]

The author's writing is very detailed, especially the depiction of Yaoyao's entire growth psychology. It feels like Yaoyao's integration is very natural. I like it very much! Everyone can jump in. I haven't watched One Piece and it looks very comfortable!

It is a very heart-warming fan novel. You can clearly feel the author's love for all the characters, and the portrayal of the characters is very consistent with the personality. Sure enough, the best thing about fan fiction is making up for regrets. Among so many fanfics, this is the first time I saw that Ace blocked Akainu's fist, saved himself and Luffy. In other articles, I was very moved when I saw the protagonist saving Ace, and Ace survived again, but this article completely made up for it. I wanted Ace to defeat Akainu, save Luffy, and smile freely in the sea with Whitebeard's will on his back. No one can resist Ace's smile. I really like one comment: becoming the Yonko was Ace's original destiny.