Home with Kids: I'm Liu Xing, Pretending to Be Xia Xue's Boyfriend

A very nice fanfic, the writing is very good, the interactions between the characters are very delicate, and they get along sweetly

I like books with this kind of feeling, come on, author

Who is the protagonist?

At present, it seems that it is for the harem, but don't write so much about the relationship between parents. Is the protagonist Xia Donghai or Liu Xing? Hurry up and start the Shura field and it will be over.

As long as the heroine is not Xiaoxue, it's fine. How can I put it, Xiaoxue's words are a bit difficult to accept.

An ordinary film and television fanfic mainly has no theme. There is a love apartment model, but it is not funny enough. There is also a harem, but I feel that the writing is not satisfactory.

When I saw Chapter 39, I was a little confused. What is the main plot? Campus love? Many girls? It's not about learning Bawen

Author, come on, work harder!

After reading Chapter 6, who is the protagonist? If the protagonist is Liu Xing, the whole text is described from a third-person perspective. It doesn't feel like a novel, but more like a prose. We always have the feeling that the protagonist is secretly observing Liu Xing!

I have finished reading all the updated ones, and my biggest feeling after reading it is that there is no priority, no main line, too many group scenes, and the protagonist's presence is somewhat suppressed. Let it sit on the bookshelf and save 10 chapters for the follow-up.