Quick Transmigration Childbearing System: The White Lotus Is Beautiful and Alluring

Xiao Yunyin is the heroine of Shuangwen, right? In the early stage, she always criticized the heroine and caused trouble for the heroine. When she couldn't afford to offend the heroine later, she reluctantly apologized, gave in, and was forgiven. She was also able to make the heroine think about her. It's amazing [Sending Hearts]

Who knows what I'm screaming about? The author is very good at describing the appearance and movements of characters. Even the beauty of the heroine has different descriptions at different times and in the eyes of different people. When I first watched it, I thought it was a cookie-cutter heartthrob, but it turns out that the heroine is beautiful and scheming. The point is, I really like the emotional scenes too! Don't stop updating, author, please work harder, update three, four, five, six, seven or eight times a day, I will hit a big wall for you.

Um... It's pretty good, although it looks a bit messy in some places. The author seems to like the way of writing flashbacks. At the beginning, you will feel that it is inexplicable when you watch it happen, and then it will be reversed to explain what happened later! Maybe it's my personal reason, I don't like this very much! Overall, the flaws outweigh the advantages! The heroine is not a weak character, which I still like! I hope that the heroine's strength can be developed in the future! Looking forward to the author's fairy tale fantasy plane! Love you! Chew Mi!

I picked it up from the last book and I really like the author's narrative style! ! ! Worth tasting! The heroine is so beautiful and scheming, it makes my blood boil. She thought she was some innocent little white flower, but turned out to be a scheming white lotus. She is a pretty and smart little fairy. Who doesn't love her? And the further you go, the better you write.

I have watched Two Worlds, so I would like to review it. I like the plot very much. I think the only shortcoming is that the explanation is not clear. It gives me the feeling that I will not want to continue reading after watching it. The reasons will not be clearly stated, but will be explained later. It will be a bit abrupt, which means that the reader will not have the feeling of step by step when starting to read, but will have a very single perspective. This perspective is like the author's perspective. Character, but we don't know the confusion of the ending, and the background of the character scenes is not clear. For example, the general environment is not written, and a character suddenly pops up and performs activities next to it, which will misunderstand the scene where we thought there are only male and female protagonists. For example, the emotional intertwining of the male and female protagonists in the second world is a bit messy, and the writing is very objectified. The male protagonist seems to be with the female protagonist because only the female protagonist can get hard, and he likes her feelings so much. I felt that I didn't feel that kind of evenly matched emotional pull. The heroine was also inexplicable and didn't write that feeling of pull. It's not that I must ask the author to write the emotional line of pull, but the plot and character setting of the second story made me feel that the author wanted to write about the pull between the male and female protagonists, but couldn't. In short, there is no problem with the author's cultural heritage, but there is no problem with the description of the charm of the characters, and there is no problem with the plot development. The topic, but the narrative expression is lacking. I saw that some people in the comment area responded earlier, so I think this article may be stuck here because of its low rating. The above is only from my perspective. I hope to see improvements in the next world, because the storyline is very good, but the description and expression will really affect the reading experience, so I don't know if I will abandon it halfway through. I will comment first and wait for my follow-up review.

It's okay, I don't like some planes very much, and the movie king plane is a bit slow and I couldn't stand it anymore, so I jumped to the next plane, but it's okay, I like it like crazy, Overall, I just couldn't stand the dragging, so I introduced a lot of past lives of the original heroine, and I was convinced.

No joke, the first world is very beautiful, I really like the setting and character of the heroine, it has completely raised my expectations. It is not the kind of super brainless and refreshing novel, it is refreshing but also clever. The author is very good at it, but it is too little. The author will update it soon, don't sleep.

I really like the heroine, she is beautiful and scheming. What I like most is the author's use of ancient poems at times. It is really just right. I can't stop reading it. All I can say is that there is no loss in investing. I'm all looking forward to the future.

The heroine is soft and easy to fall over. She is really good-looking and has a very distinct personality. Although she is gentle on the surface, she is powerful in her thoughts. The male protagonist feels too impatient [laughter] [laughter]

It's very beautiful, the author's writing is very good, but there are too few and it's not enough to read. I like the heroine so much, she is beautiful, flirtatious and scheming.