Picked Up by the Young Lady

After reading more than ten chapters, the relationship between people is relatively realistic. Unlike most online novels, the male protagonist will be ridiculed and ridiculed wherever he goes and everyone he meets. For example, his mother-in-law is very nice to him, and he is very harmonious when eating with his wife's best friend and boyfriend.

I originally wanted to give 4 stars, but the author said that this is his first time writing, so I will give it 5 stars. There are actually not many characters in the early stage. It is okay to write like this. If you are not an experienced writer, write less people. When there are too many people, it is easy to overturn and worry. But the storyline may not be so exciting. Then, after reading more than ten or twenty chapters, I feel that the characters are not vivid enough. It is the character, temper, and speech and behavior of that kind of person. It is not well written. But this is the first time the author has written like this, and it is already great. It can be seen that the author still has some skills. Come on [cool]

It's very interesting, but it just allows the male protagonist to spend more time with the female protagonist.

Cool! The early stages of the plot are a bit slow, but as you get to the back, the car speeds up and you can't even brake. The content is mainly about daily life. If you like to read sweet stories with a single female protagonist, you can do it without thinking. I also read the reviews before reading it, and also read some negative reviews. Some of the negative reviews are caused by not reading carefully. Maybe it's because this is the first time the author writes a novel. It is also possible that the author carefully read every word when reading the novel, so it is easy to understand the ambiguity of the novel he wrote if he did not read it carefully. There are also some shortcomings, such as the main plot is not very clear, the male protagonist has no clear goal, and is somewhat passive. However, it doesn't feel aggrieved to watch, and it's really fun to put yourself into the role of the male protagonist. Especially the interaction between Lin Yuan and Qin Qianxia's sister-brother love is so annoying to watch. Overall, as the author's debut short story, it's very good. I hope the author can publish the next book as soon as possible.

Become a sailor for yourself. [Thinking] This is really a book with a single heroine. [Crying] Part of the comment section said that this is a book with multiple female protagonists. Because when the book was opened, the plan was to write multiple female protagonists, so the label chose multiple female protagonists. But halfway through writing, I realized that I couldn't write a story with multiple female protagonists, so I temporarily changed it to a single female protagonist. [Think]

It's nice to watch, mainly because it's more everyday, not too brainless, and has a relatively positive outlook on life.

The writing is still very good, but maybe the subject matter is too old. But the emotional portrayal is very delicate, and it is not easy to write so many chapters. Urban writing is indeed difficult to write without a lot of experience. Personally, I think it's quite to my liking. Now I like to read short stories, but I can't stand the ones that are too long. By the way, can you watch "Hello, I'm coughing up phlegm"? Hey [laughing evilly] [asking for attention]

It's still very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. I hope the author will update it soon. I can't get enough of it.

The author of this book writes very well. The heroine and the hero are particularly beautiful. The relationship between the hero and the heroine gradually warms up.

Hope to stick with it