A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From Beggar to Saint

The writing is fluent, the imagination is rich, the concept is clever, the story has ups and downs, it is a very interesting book, I look forward to more exciting things!

I was attracted by the introduction of this book. If he is strong, let him be strong, the breeze will blow on the hills; if he is strong, let him be strong, the bright moon will shine on the river. There is no strongest, only stronger. Only by climbing up step by step can you finally control your own destiny. These sentences are well written and very philosophical. Opening this book, you can see a very realistic civilian life, a security guard travels through beggars, the modern travels through ancient times, dual identities overlap, the situational life is still based on realism, the plot is well arranged, and there is strong substitution. It may be due to the novice writer. Some of the grammar is not very smooth, and the pronouns are sometimes a bit confusing. There should be some dialects in the book. I feel Sometimes I feel like I can't understand it, but I can see that the author is a person who writes very carefully. He can express his imagination in words. The plot, characters, environment, and the construction of the description definitely require a lot of effort and effort. As a new writer, I see that it is not easy to see that you can write such a plot. I support it with five stars! The following plot is very exciting, I hope the author's writing style can be improved to a higher level!

The author is very attentive, and the titles of each article are exquisitely written. At first glance, you can tell that he is a very attentive person, especially the story of the novel. The plot is very attractive, and each chapter is particularly exciting. I can't help but read it again and continue to follow it! Keep reading, the more you read, the more interesting it becomes.

Having a postdoctoral degree in Chinese language and literature, I believe that a thousand words cannot be worth my simple words. Speaking in first-class Mandarin, it is: Le Liu Beer Duck!

If you don't like cheating protagonists, this is the right book to choose! Everything goes smoothly for the invincible protagonist, but ups and downs along the way are the various aspects of life! The arrangement of scenes and plot conflicts are all in place and very attractive! Worth reading! [Like][Like][Like]

A very beautiful article about cultivating immortals, interesting stories, wonderful descriptions, hearty lyricism, and true expressions. There is a world of its own in the words. It is a very worth reading article [Like]

It's a good novel, very interesting. Keep up the good work, author!

It has rich imagination, sufficient knowledge reserves, wonderful writing, distinctive characters and distinctive plots, and is a unique novel about cultivating immortals.

The writing is smooth and engaging, a different kind of cultivating immortality, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the characters are vividly drawn, exciting, fascinating, and beautiful to watch

There is a road to the fairyland and bones gather together. I really like this sentence. The setting of the plot in the article is not brainless. I will stock up my bookshelf and read it slowly~