Hong Kong Island: My Underling Is an Undercover Agent

It's alright. But is it really okay for a cultivator to act with the mindset of an ordinary person?

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This book is alright; I hope it keeps up the good work and updates more frequently. The only downside is that the term "Great Luo Golden Immortal" feels a bit out of place. It's a cultivation/fantasy story and doesn't quite fit the Hong Kong variety show genre. But don't worry about that; reading novels and web novels is just for passing the time, so it's not a big deal. The most important thing is a smooth plot, a clear storyline, and avoiding too much unnecessary rambling.

It's pretty good! I've seen too many undercover gangster movies, this is the first time I've seen something like this.

How could it get such a low score? The writing is concise and fluent, the plot is tight and engaging, and the characters are vividly portrayed. The only regret is that the ending felt rushed. However, this is the author's first book, so it's already very good! I believe the author will have many more and better works in the future!

I rarely read gangster/gangster novels, but this one is quite good. Author, keep it up!

It's very interesting to read. It's a refreshing read, unlike other Hong Kong novels. Don't imagine it as some kind of superhuman or immortal being. Just read it as an invincible, half-naive, pretending-to-be-a-pig story.

"Da Luo" is just a nicer way of putting it! He can't even make a proper amulet.

I'll give it a good review, but I feel that the strength of this Great Luo is portrayed somewhat weakly in the book. He lacks abilities like flying through the sky and diving into the earth, divine sense marking, large-scale teleportation, and creating clones. Instead, he's mostly shown short-range teleportation, bone-crushing, and superhuman physical abilities. I guess this is to reduce the impact of this overpowered ability and show him as someone who truly lives in the mortal world.

Putting everything else aside, the joke about the mob boss paying his underlings' social security and housing fund contributions, only to discover that the underlings had already done it—and it was even paid by the police station!—Is just brilliant! 🤭🤭🤭