I Transmigrated into a Book, Changed the Plot, and Got Dragged into the Mess

The writing style needs to be improved, and the plot logic could actually be clearer. "I hope my Yi Nanping will have a good ending." Jun Yan came to rewrite the plot for Yi Nanping. "In my previous life, I only focused on cultivation, but I never saw the beautiful scenery in the world. This time I want to accompany him to see it." He had already made up his mind not to be in the limelight in this life, but for that person he still chose the dazzling Xiao Yujin. To be honest, I thought Xiao Yujin would be a cold character. Who knew that Xiao could be a little funny when he climbed into bed. [Thinking] The system is also quite outrageous. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing where the host has to ask the system for tasks. If nothing else, I have to give this system a good review.

It's nice to see, Yanyan is so cute. Jinbao realizes his feelings for Yanyan and quickly confesses his feelings without any hesitation. Anyway, one word is good, two words are very good, and three words are very good (ღˇ◡ˇღ). It's big, cute, and lively [laughing] [laughing] Highly recommended

Hehe, I am very optimistic about Yan Sheng and Jun Xi! ! So excited^O^[shy][shy]

Give yourself a five-star review to encourage myself😌 What a fool! There was a comment yesterday, but I didn't find it yesterday. I just saw it today. I think what he said makes sense. The protagonist I wrote may be a little stupid and a little weak. Well, let me add a little bit, that is, the reason why he is weak is because the protagonist himself has not practiced well since he entered the book. He has always been in a state where he can spend one day, three days fishing and two days drying nets. In terms of stupidity, although my setting Jun Yan is a bit like an "unsavvy fox demon", he is not stupid. However, maybe because I am relatively stupid myself, the description is a bit stupid. This is a problem with my description, and I will try to change it later. If Paper Man is bad, don't scold Paper Man. After all, these are all written by the author. Just scold the author. Finally, this kind of suggestion is very helpful to the author in writing the book. If you feel this way, you must put it forward. I wish you all a happy reading

Not bad. Keep up the good work, the author (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) [Love] [Love]

@Elegy Let me tell you, author, I hate bad writing. Fortunately, I saw Chapter 13, otherwise... Otherwise you will lose one reader and five-star praise!

The writing is very good, I like it very much

Jun Yan came here for Xiao Yujin at the beginning, and the system 'Qiqiqi' was also very kind to Yanyan. Jinbao quickly expressed his feelings after understanding his feelings for Yanyan, and Yanyan also fell in love with Jinbao during the process of getting along; Mian Yanyan also knew what he had experienced. Yanyan and Jinbao ended up after they formed a contract [crying]. Several pairs of deputy CPs finally got married. The following extra episodes are also quite interesting [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

This book is super nice [send my heart] [send my heart], the protagonist's emotional line is super fast and there are many sub-CPs. Of course, my favorite is the one about Jun Xi. Jun Xi talks to Jun Yan, and the caring look reminds me of my mother (˵¯͒¯͒˵), it is so cute [shy][hurt Shame], what I like the most is that this book does not have a plot like other books. The protagonist can play freely, without being forced to do tasks and OOC. Furthermore, Jun Yan has liked Jinbao from the beginning and came here for him. After the cleaning, the author can write more books. I love reading (灬ꈍ εꈍ灬)

It's very interesting. The author's writing techniques are very innovative, and the plot is very interesting and not draggy. [Like][Like][Like]