Ling Cage: Living with Bai Yuekui, Starting in Jiuchuan City

This is the only one being updated on the entire internet right now, I hope the author won't give up. @ Is it orange?

This is recommended. There are many people, so I'd better say it. If it's a reader who reads a purely enjoyable novel, that is, what the protagonist must be like, it should not be suitable, and they will scold me. My audience for this book has read The Spirit Cage, or is at least interested in The Spirit Cage (if interested, I feel that the plot is complete and complete, which is better than the mindless and exciting, which is what I am doing). My direction is also the same, and it is consistent with the original work to extend and complete the plot that has not yet appeared. I think the current direction of Spirit Cage fandom is to complete the plot, as long as most people agree with it.

It looks good, but the updates are too slow, so I decided to keep the book [please update]

The background in the original book is very vague, but this one is more logical, and the origin of the source of life is easy to understand. It is similar to the aura of cultivating immortals, the original energy of genes and the energy of the universe. These types are similar. They are not simply human vitality.

To be honest, the first part was pretty good. After all, few people wrote about Yue Kui, but after the main character was blown to death and turned into a soul, it felt like it was just so-so. It was obvious that there were fewer people reading it. I wonder if the author noticed it?

After reading it, overall it's pretty good. Compared to other Ling Cage fanfics, it's unique. It introduces the background of the Ling Cage world while adding a bit of personal understanding. It also has many connections with the plot of Ling Cage and its prequel comic "Yue Kui Zhuan". It can follow the main plot while also inserting the protagonist's own story. , In addition, I personally feel that the description of the emotional development between the protagonist and Boss Bai is still a bit lacking. I suggest you write more about it and you will like to watch it [laughing] The single heroine is very good, unlike other fans who start a harem with Kuku. This is also what I recommend (those who like to watch harems will pretend I didn't say it). The last thing I want to say is Quick update, I can't sleep.

In Chapter 13, I felt that he should have disabled this woman's hands and feet, or kill her. I feel like I plugged up most of the loopholes when I was a kid, but I just couldn't make sense of it when I was reading. Although the plot doesn't have any big problems in writing, it just looks like it. My thoughts are unclear. Then there is nothing uncomfortable. It's stuck there and can't go up or down.

Come on, author! I think the biggest attraction of this book is the setting and overall view. Using the alien invasive species Dominator of Life to explain the extinction of species hundreds of millions of years ago and the transformation of Mana's ecology. To be honest, the author's imagination is really good! But starting from the 4th volume, I gradually lost much desire to read it. The first three volumes are worth reading. I thought that this would be the only one for Spirit Cage fans, so I finished reading it.

I won't say too much. Before the Wasteland chapter, I really didn't have any poisonous points. After reading the whole process, I started skipping through the Wasteland chapter. However, the whole process is basically interesting and safe to eat. Single heroine: Boss Bai Other female characters are mainly about teasing but not touching or touching, which is not to say flirting! Mainly, I felt like I was going to have sex but nothing happened. It was a pretty good single-female story.

I am Dr. Pi. For two months, Captain Buck verbally attacked me. All kinds of little carrots targeted me. He sneered at me. Xie Lingtong was impatient with me. I endured it countless times, but was framed by Darcy. But I was reborn two months ago. Chapter 50 was updated to listen to my revenge plan.