Come Cuddle! The General’s Young Bride Is Sweet and Obedient

It's quite difficult for the author. It's hard to agree with others. I saw several people in the comments saying they wanted to read sweet stories, but I personally think it's better to read sadistic yet sweet stories. Brainless sweet stories are really boring. I hope the author can write according to his own ideas and not be affected by those comments. I just like reading ancient texts

Five-star praise. In the previous life, everyone was killed, and not even Qingyun could protect him. It's better to listen to Qiao's advice in this life and save yourself and Qingyun. No matter what happens, it won't be worse than the last life. At least I have no regrets. Besides, there is also a sixth prince + a time-traveling girl, which is a pretty good lineup. I believe it will defeat the evil people. PS: I have a small suggestion, why not let the prince, the second prince and the third prince fight among themselves, and let the prince discover the second prince's disobedience earlier.

Very good! Deep in my heart, if it weren't for the extra episode, I would have turned against him and cursed him! After all, who doesn't enjoy a perfect reunion? [Laughs] Come and see! The CP here is so sweet! The general here is so sassy, ​​and the general's wife here [laughs evilly] [laughs evilly] You know!

It looks good, the plot is wonderful, but the writing could be strengthened, and the emotional scenes are okay, but when writing about abuse, it is generally unable to make readers feel deeply. At the end, the author changed Yan's will a little bit. She was a responsible person before, maybe because she was too worried about Luo. Later, although she was cowardly because of Luo's safety, but in After Luo resisted several times, Yan should not send Luo away but let Luo stay for the last time. This can better reflect Yan's feeling and magnanimity as the commander of the first army, and better pave the way for the following, so that Yan's death and Luo's sadness can better affect the hearts of readers. The following extras can give another ending to friends who don't like to read sad stories. I look forward to the author's next book, and hope the author will make great progress (this is just a personal opinion, don't criticize me). I also wish everyone a happy new year! [Laughs][laughs]

I want to know if Miss Qiao came through time [laughing]

Not bad, but the early stage is indeed a bit trivial, the progress is slow, and it gradually gets better in the middle. There are twists and turns, and the emotional scenes are just right. There are not too many depictions, and there are not too many intimate scenes, but it is still good. Too much sex is not good.

The sense of déjà vu in the palace drama, give the author five stars to support

I really want to know what the author's brain looks like and how he writes. It's so detailed. I feel like I'm seeing the world in front of me. Ah, author, can you lend me your brain? [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

I always feel that what I'm watching is not the two female protagonists, but the romance [thinking]. Yan Yunqing doesn't think of herself as a female [or anything]. There are some weird things that I can't explain, but the relationship between the two is pretty good.

Looks good [laughs] Come on [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]