The Outcast: I Grew Up with Lu Linglong

It's very good. It has many girls, and the super girl is fast. I won the first one (Xia He) in Chapter 11. Good reviews for wearing it (turning back the body's time) The author drives well Lightning protection is pretty good The plot in the front is too fast, and the dialogues are not very comfortable to watch. I don't know if it's because I'm used to it or something, but later it's fine. The heroines are all in their first virginity (but the description is not very good, and the imagination is a bit confusing, but it is not a big problem, at least it is much better than most of the ones I have seen) There is a description of the heroine watching a short video (everyone understands it) (although it is not impossible to watch, it is somewhat uncomfortable) Although it feels quite good now, the protagonist has never hidden his clumsiness and feels a little uncomfortable. The author said that he was reported, not recommended, and sent, so many of them have not yet been confiscated, which can also be regarded as accepted, with an open ending.

Come on, write well. As long as you write, I will follow you. Don't let it suck or be a eunuch.

The heroine is well written, but she is very tough on enemies. She can be said to be invincible. She refuses to kill enemies. When she was over fifty, she killed a king in front of Wang Ai and never eradicated them.

Driving + harem requires five-star support

[Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] It's very good, it suits my taste [admiration]

It's generally OK, but there are too many small mistakes.

Very short but well written [Like][Like][Like]

Come on, come on, come on

It's quite interesting, but the pace could be slowed down a bit and don't be a cultivator. It's better to write more and not end up with hundreds of thousands of words. It's very beautiful.

Well, it's very good. It's an interception of Hu Wen, not a takeover.