Wuxia Crossover: Heaven-Defying Comprehension, Saving Lianxing from the Start

Not bad, occupy the first floor

It's okay, but the plot isn't compact enough. If you want to write another novel, you can write a follow-up to this one, and write a more epic story instead of being petty.

Good writing, keep up the good work, hurry up, hurry up

It's okay, but there are some places that are really annoying ¬_¬｀ [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's well written, but the shortcoming is that it's short. My friend, you don't want others to say you are short either🤣

Good, the content is non-toxic

Take a good look at the children. After finishing their homework, there is nothing impossible. Is it possible to play together? They are still very strong. Where do you work at the League of Legends cup coffee shop? Happy birthday, baby.

Come on and write a new book