A City-Dwelling Villain, but I Cultivate Immortality

Make some suggestions, 1. The author can open a separate chapter to explain the meaning of Northeastern dialect. Local Northeastern people are fine, but people from other places may not understand it. If you don't understand it, it will be easy to get blinded, and the data will be bad. 2. In terms of plot, a harem is okay, but not too many. It is best to limit it to 3-5. If there are too many, it will be too much to write and it will be uncomfortable to watch. And don't make any mistakes. If there are too many, it will cause trouble. 3. In the follow-up plot, there will be a harem after cultivating immortals. In this case, the family members will be able to cultivate immortals together, and then the spiritual energy will be revived. At this time, you can do some work, and it depends on you. If it fits the plot, I suggest it be funny. After all, it is considered a semi-comedy. It is a bit nondescript when it is heated. Of course, if there is a turning point, it can be more passionate. 4. For subsequent protagonists, it is best to have 1-3 protagonists in the follow-up. If one is longer, write shorter, and if there are more, write shorter, and then revive the spiritual energy and add world fusion or world collision. In this way, you can write a friendly plot without losing the funny style, and it can be appropriately passionate and long (if you don't want to write it long, just treat it as if I didn't say it). That's all for now. It's a very good book. It would be better if it can be maintained or improved in the future. If you see my comment, you can read the content of the book. If you think it is good, support it.

It makes me laugh so hard, Northeastern Railway will never disappoint you

Very exciting, this is also a breath of fresh air in villain writing [face covering] I have read so many villain articles. This is the first time I have seen the Northeastern villain. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you.

I am from the Northeast, but some Northeastern dialects are used in the wrong context. I suggest the author contact a few Northeasterners and read them before posting the chapters. It is not enough to go overboard.

I can watch it. The subject matter is quite novel. The Northeastern dialect is still not authentic.

It's pretty good, but this naughty thing is making you nagging.

What's going on, bro? [What] We don't have an accent? You just talk normally, how can you be like that? Aren't you just slandering us? Be careful, I will report you to Tomato

Although it's a similar routine, but with the addition of Dong Baiyin's setting, he instantly stood out among the book group [laughing]

Very good. I speak Northeastern very well.

I never thought that the Northeastern dialect version of the novel could be so interesting. I laughed like a maggot in bed [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]