Low-Key Immortal Cultivation in the City

Yes, it is indeed casual, there is no such thing as a slap in the face, and there are no old routines, but judging from the progress, it is indeed quite fast, and I can't think of what to write next. Personal opinion is pretty good to watch.

So far, it's pretty good. There are no those dog-skin plasters. The most important thing is that the bloody plot is not watery. It feels very relaxed when watching it, which is good. I personally like this style better.

The writing is very realistic, especially the chapters about sending my girlfriend home!

Updated to Chapter 63. After reading it, I will briefly say that I will be disappointed if I want to see what Old Mou God can do with the conspiracy of a thousand-year-old weirdo. Reality has no aura and the protagonist is not necessary at all. So far, the author's rhythm is very good. As for the change of the protagonist's mentality, I think it is okay. He does not have the loyalty of youth or the decay of old age, but the stability accumulated by time. There are no dangers in the world of immortality in this world, and the protagonist's mentality is a very comfortable one.

This is the best spiritual food for us old bookworms! Just don't have too many women. Four women should be together in the end, otherwise it will be easy to jump. Don't be too high-profile, don't be too low-key, just have a little stimulation once in a while😁

Not bad, just what I wanted. The Dharma should not be passed on lightly. The beneficiaries of various subsequent results must be compensated (for example, 1 million for a medicinal bath is very good). It is best to add a sentence, do not pass it on. If you pass it on, you will be paid 1 million.

It's a very daily, leisurely urban life of cultivating immortals. Only one update every day is too little. Save more manuscripts and write more words. You can't even do it with perfect attendance. Lazy [learned]

After reading a few chapters, I felt that the setting of cultivating immortals was superfluous! The style of writing about daily life is pretty good so far, but I think it would be more appropriate to write a sweet article about daily life in the city. Let's talk about this first and then look at the follow-up.

Looks very natural and smooth

It looks great, good luck to the author!