He transmigrated, but had no heaven-defying talent, no old master to guide him, and no golden finger. To top it off, his new body belonged to a good-for-nothing.
What was he supposed to do?
Anyone there? This was urgent.
Just as Bai Yitian waited for his long-overdue golden finger, someone showed up and told him to stop daydreaming. The golden finger wasn't late. It was gone for good.
Fortunately, the door to an apartment was open to him.
After moving in, Bai Yitian had to help his neighbors to earn enough for rent.
Transmigrated into a zombie world, and your brains are about to get eaten?
Don't panic. I'm here to help you deal with those little zombies.
Transmigrated as a prince about to be exiled?
Let's rebel. I'll be your general, and we'll march on the capital and make you emperor.
Transmigrated into a world of immortal heroes, but stuck as a mortal?
Fellow Daoist, take this Nine-Revolution Golden Pill, and let's enjoy cultivating together.
After helping everyone out, Bai Yitian suddenly realized one day that he'd become one of the apartment's big shots.
The protagonist already had two scheming enemies in the zombie world who dragged him down, which was already frustrating enough. Then, in the next 16 chapters, the protagonist, with only around 2000 copper coins, still has to do a job that only earns a dozen or so copper coins a day.
It's no wonder nobody's reading this; it's intellectually simplistic, forced, and frustrating—goodness, the author has covered most of the worst aspects. If you don't believe me, just wait until chapter twenty, and you'll experience all three of those points I mentioned, and maybe even discover other flaws.
It's pretty toxic, to say the least. The protagonist seems a bit dim-witted. One chapter says the protagonist, Bai Yitian, transmigrated, his soul primarily based on Bai Yitian from Earth, but also fused with the soul of Bai Yitian from Changfeng Kingdom. So, it seems the transmigrated protagonist's subjective consciousness is dominant, but there's also the original body's influence.
I couldn't stand it anymore. After the protagonist is able to cultivate internal energy, A ruthless character just showed up at their door demanding money. , As a result, this character was murdered. The protagonist, despite having honed his skills for sixty years, was still imprisoned. , , The protagonist cleans it once, then sends someone to make it dirty again. I can't watch it anymore. The protagonist is powerless, and the constant suppression makes it unpleasant to watch.
The writing is alright, but I really felt uncomfortable when I got to the chapter about the female ghost. Forcing the protagonist into being mentally challenged and mentally ill felt like calling a deer a horse. There's already time travel, ghosts appear, and yet they still added a psychopath to the protagonist's character setting.
It's not that you're deliberately making people stupid, but you didn't even bother to research the haunted house part before rushing through it. And your world started by introducing a low-martial arts world, and then suddenly there's a sealed jar with a talisman and this haunted house with a female ghost. Seriously, did you even bother to research this world? 😅😅😅 I can't watch anymore.
Sorry, I can't take it anymore; the plot is just indescribable. The premise is good, and the writing is decent, but I don't know why it gets weirder and weirder as it goes on.
I really wanted to keep watching, but the main character seemed to have some mental issues, which made me feel uneasy.
The brain drain is a bit too extreme, isn't it?
Come on!!!