The Dimension-Hopping Dream Traveler

A world is too long,

It feels pretty good so far, and the characters are very three-dimensional, but as a result, the length has become a bit longer. The advantage is also because of the large length, it better shapes the characters, unlike some other Zhutianliu books, where the plot is like a running account and the characters are seriously OOC.

Some book friends of Volume 1 of Class A, Year Three feel that the pace is too long, but I think it's actually okay. After all, this book does not belong to the fast-travel series, but belongs to the Infinite Flow series. Of course, it is up to the author to decide whether this is specific. My personal opinion is that Class A, Year Three, is pretty good, and there is no too abrupt plot. I haven't finished the second part yet. Well, the author hasn't finished it either. I'll post the second review after the second part is finished. Well, that's it [laughter]

The author's writing is good. I give it five stars for encouragement. Now it seems that there is nothing poisonous about it, and it is very submissive. I have read the latest chapter from Chapter 1 to the latest chapter.

It's very good. The writing is okay, but I feel like the first chapter is a bit too long. Impatient readers may not be able to finish it. It would be better if there were more chapters so that you can skip the plot that you don't want to read.

It's wonderful, but the author can let the protagonist specialize in one kind of power, such as strengthening the protagonist himself and then continuously strengthening it based on the power of the Knight of the Ring [Thinking], always changing the use of various equipment will make the protagonist himself weak, and being strong is the most perfect. In the end, the Knight of the Ring is the most 👍, handsome and strong! [Laugh]

It's very interesting. Come on, the author. You must stick to it. I hope the protagonist can develop the Knights of the Ring system to a deeper level. I think the Lord of the Rings is quite handsome [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] I don't know when the heroine will come out and I'm looking forward to it

Not bad but the first chapter is a bit long

Can you write an Assassination Classroom?

It's pretty good, but each world is a little long and the pace isn't particularly good.